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Array ( [sid] => 104924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => **I felt forever** [time] => 2005-09-02 17:57:10 [hometext] => .Dale. [bodytext] => Last year, it was different.
I had you, i knew no harm.
Can you ever even imagine
what it's like now that your gone?
Your in love, and i am envious.
upset, about to cry.
And did we ever end this,
how could we say goodbye?
This thing we had isn't over,
my feelings remain here still.
The age thing is a problem.
But..you know now, this is real.
In your embrace, i felt forever.
And would do anything for you.
We talked about us everynight,
but neither of us knew...
How much it meant to both of us,
that neither one got hurt.
Every week another girl,
you're such a no good flirt.
The future holds a mystery
the past it holds the truth.
Three years seams like eternity,
but..i'll wait it out for you.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Lollypopxcore [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

**I felt forever**

Contributed by Lollypopxcore on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:57:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Last year, it was different.
I had you, i knew no harm.
Can you ever even imagine
what it's like now that your gone?
Your in love, and i am envious.
upset, about to cry.
And did we ever end this,
how could we say goodbye?
This thing we had isn't over,
my feelings remain here still.
The age thing is a problem.
But..you know now, this is real.
In your embrace, i felt forever.
And would do anything for you.
We talked about us everynight,
but neither of us knew...
How much it meant to both of us,
that neither one got hurt.
Every week another girl,
you're such a no good flirt.
The future holds a mystery
the past it holds the truth.
Three years seams like eternity,
but..i'll wait it out for you.

Copyright © Lollypopxcore ... [ 2005-09-02 17:57:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: **I felt forever** (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:12:50 PM AEST
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"In your embrace I felt forever"
There is so much to emote with, here, the sombre, heart wrenching tone of love-lost, and the counterbalance of whole-hearted devotion. It is a blur of confusion whilst both are involved...which is more than never, as they do come hand in hand! This piece was not only moving, but mood provoking. Thanks for sharing :)

Re: **I felt forever** (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:50:12 AM AEST
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I'll echo the last comment, that line is awesome. I wish I'd have written it.
But still not worth waiting for. A guy who can't be true to one now, and doesn't change now, won't change later. I'm a guy, I know us.
Well, take care, good poem.
David

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