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[title] => Soul Within Sin
[time] => 2003-01-15 20:07:49
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[bodytext] => My soul stands still against a wall,
unable to move in fear to fall.
Candles flicker silently around the room,
framing articals of an invaded tomb.
This is now and now is to late,
enemies have won against Gods fate.
To close to the dark side, to far from light,
my soul has now lost its fight.
My heart torn from the sharp edges of a knife,
time cut short from my pathetic unfinished life.
The blade painfully through every layer of skin,
my soul bearing the pain of my sin.
My soul found its fate,
and now its too late.....
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Soul Within Sin
Contributed by
mckayla
on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My soul stands still against a wall,
unable to move in fear to fall.
Candles flicker silently around the room,
framing articals of an invaded tomb.
This is now and now is to late,
enemies have won against Gods fate.
To close to the dark side, to far from light,
my soul has now lost its fight.
My heart torn from the sharp edges of a knife,
time cut short from my pathetic unfinished life.
The blade painfully through every layer of skin,
my soul bearing the pain of my sin.
My soul found its fate,
and now its too late.....
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mckayla
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2003-01-15 20:07:49]
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:40:31 PM AEST
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Words well woven.
wordsy. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:55:37 PM AEST
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| never too late,,to ,,believ,,in god,,well written spooky |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:48:44 AM AEST
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Soul Within Sin...how lovely of a title is that....i do hope this isnt how you are feeling...that your soul has lost its fight....that's such a dark place to bein....beautiful write Katherine...u keep em ' coming....i enjoy reading your poetry....love this...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 04:07:49 PM AEST
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| it seems you have met your moment and quite a striking moment it is too |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 04:31:06 PM AEST
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| This is really good, I've been here many times. Keep writting. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by Garethuk on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 10:16:11 AM AEST
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| An excellent poem, very well written but i have to say it is never too late, knock and the door shall be opened seek and you will find, please note the 'will' is not a might. Dont give up! |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by Ash on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 01:27:25 PM AEST
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| Very well written, very deep, and I ffeel exactly how the subject of this poem does. If it is about you, I hope you'll find a candle to light your way out of the despair. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:31:19 AM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by MattTheMan on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:58:09 PM AEST
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| This is just great. I love deep, descriptive poetry like this that uses a lot of metaphors. Excellent work, and don't you just love how we all have a place to share poetry like this? This stuff is so personal, it's nice to be able to share it with actual human beings, but to still be slightly removed. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by MattTheMan on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:58:36 PM AEST
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| This is just great. I love deep, descriptive poetry like this that uses a lot of metaphors. Excellent work, and don't you just love how we all have a place to share poetry like this? This stuff is so personal, it's nice to be able to share it with actual human beings, but to still be slightly removed. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:29:10 PM AEST
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Words of pain, where the souls sadness only remains.
Where there is will there is way, as all do say!
You have a way with words that makes us stop and think on wether this is the only way out.......
Really sad and maybe somewhere if you ask there is hope. |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:12:44 PM AEST
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a very chilling and thought provoking write...so sad...but i think you too strong to think it is too late...
hugs
kara |
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Re: Soul Within Sin
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:20:08 PM AEST
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| the last two lines of this are CRUSHING and OMG 12 replies |
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