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Array ( [sid] => 104902 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Truth [time] => 2005-09-02 10:59:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When we are apart, my soul goes into a spasm.

When were together I get an emotional orgasm.

Your beauty is what dreams are made of

I love you cuz you so intellectual, so sexual.

You stimulate my physical, mental & visual.

You are the queen of eternal satisfaction,

with you, frustration aint even an option

Your supreme presence resulting from the very essence of you supernatural being

demands jaw dropping awe where you are seen.

When you look me in the eyes, you bring all resistance to crumbs.

When you speak to me, it feels like your making love to my eardrums.

When you dance its pure poetry causing the pertrution of my desire to acquire your undeniable perfection
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Truth

Contributed by Caged Soul on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:59:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When we are apart, my soul goes into a spasm.

When were together I get an emotional orgasm.

Your beauty is what dreams are made of

I love you cuz you so intellectual, so sexual.

You stimulate my physical, mental & visual.

You are the queen of eternal satisfaction,

with you, frustration aint even an option

Your supreme presence resulting from the very essence of you supernatural being

demands jaw dropping awe where you are seen.

When you look me in the eyes, you bring all resistance to crumbs.

When you speak to me, it feels like your making love to my eardrums.

When you dance its pure poetry causing the pertrution of my desire to acquire your undeniable perfection

Copyright © Caged Soul ... [ 2005-09-02 10:59:05]
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Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:49:22 PM AEST
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Wow, haha, the first two stanzas really surprised me, it sounded good though, I just felt it hit my heart you know, seemed very powerfull, keep up the sweet work. SLipSiX.

Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:25:53 AM AEST
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wow. this is "your ultimate feel-good" poem right here. *grins from ear to ear*
I love the intention and i love the honesty beneath this. Some interesting analogies, here :) This is awesome. Good work ;)

Re: Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:32:29 PM AEST
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"When you speak to me, it feels like you're making love to my eardrums." Umm, now thats quite interestingly put. Holds attention till the very end.

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