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Her breath is so soft
upon his right shoulder
They are nothing more than
lust in an image
Maybe this time she doesn't want to go..
Did you ever think of that?

My arms are wrapped around his body
and my legs are throbbing in pain
I just want to be whole again
not a point for him
a place for him to ignite
inside while tempting the outside.

We are lovers
and she lets go
For she knows not what she does,
Knows not that she burns.
His mark imprinted on her, in her
Forever to be judged
There is a bare part of her
Where none is yet to go

Lust and greed
Spawned hell's seed
and it shall live on
the truth
the ignorance
I do not know how to escape
For running brings me back into his arms
Where I then am sober
no longer

Love me
Just don't mutilate it's definition
Hold me
Just don't take that farther
Save me
From myself,
and the hell you've caused.

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The Hell You've caused

Contributed by Inevitable on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:21:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Her breath is so soft
upon his right shoulder
They are nothing more than
lust in an image
Maybe this time she doesn't want to go..
Did you ever think of that?

My arms are wrapped around his body
and my legs are throbbing in pain
I just want to be whole again
not a point for him
a place for him to ignite
inside while tempting the outside.

We are lovers
and she lets go
For she knows not what she does,
Knows not that she burns.
His mark imprinted on her, in her
Forever to be judged
There is a bare part of her
Where none is yet to go

Lust and greed
Spawned hell's seed
and it shall live on
the truth
the ignorance
I do not know how to escape
For running brings me back into his arms
Where I then am sober
no longer

Love me
Just don't mutilate it's definition
Hold me
Just don't take that farther
Save me
From myself,
and the hell you've caused.

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2005-09-02 02:21:00]
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Re: The Hell You've caused (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 03:05:38 AM AEST
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Emotional this certainly is, and well spoken. The language is highly vivid, and I think you give voice to the feelings of many who we don't often hear from. Keep writing!

Andrew

Re: The Hell You've caused (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 12:13:00 AM AEST
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your really show your emotion here,..hope things all go well...

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