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Never have been
Walk right by
Never catch there eye

Im invisible
Seems impossible
But im invisible
Its that simple

Never heard
Not one word
Say something
Hear nothing

Want to be seen
You know what i mean
Want to be heard
Seems almost absurd

Im not there
No matter where
They dont care
Its not fair
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Invisible

Contributed by bluesbaby811 on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:59:10 PM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems

Never seen
Never have been
Walk right by
Never catch there eye

Im invisible
Seems impossible
But im invisible
Its that simple

Never heard
Not one word
Say something
Hear nothing

Want to be seen
You know what i mean
Want to be heard
Seems almost absurd

Im not there
No matter where
They dont care
Its not fair

Copyright © bluesbaby811 ... [ 2005-09-01 19:59:10]
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Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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wow. very powerful. i know exactly what you mean. noone listens to me other then this site. but thats rare. keep up the good work
-trini

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:24:53 PM AEST
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wow
ive felt this way b4
i love this poem :D

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:05:33 PM AEST
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yep being unnoticed is a terrible thing for one to go through....I am sorry you feel this way....

Really touching poem, i do feel for you.

You will find yourself, take hope!

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:37:51 PM AEST
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Well then THEY arent worth it. ALot of ppl do , make others and ones self feel invisible.! I have been there.! Thanks for posting

Brew~

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by shep on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:10:26 PM AEST
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touched me. currently feel the same way.

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Tsukasa on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:06:04 PM AEST
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Very, very touching. I feel like that a lot, it seems.

Anyway, I loved the poem.

Keep at it.

-Jen

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by shaggy2468 on Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 08:45:14 PM AEST
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diddio
i used to feel the same way

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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great poem

went through it, but got over it. so keep your head up and you will too.

but anyway, good work.

~Natalya

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Amazon on Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 09:34:56 PM AEST
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I think everyone feels this way one time or another just take hope in knowing that this will pass and one day someone will take notice

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