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Array ( [sid] => 104860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bars [time] => 2005-09-01 18:52:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => if only i can define the true meaning of society i will
i realize as a person facing the world on my own, i have to be strong
people at times can be fake
i've been used strongly by my own damn friends and i still have the small little faith inside of me for heavens sake
i gave up so many times
i gave up because i felt as though i was worthless
no more than a dime
for a reason or another i look and think that it is truly a reason why i am here
why
i less know, but i must say, i live in fear
i know that everyone that smiles in your face is not your friend
thats why i stand alone and by myself and on myself i depend
life to me is like a rhythem
it can stop
keep the beat and as well bring heat
i'm still here ever though i have been down so long
but i'm strong
Forgive me father, but a time like this i have to get my bags and move the hell on
i think and ask myself why do these bad things happen to me
God has my life plan
i'm going to stop worring and stop being blind but older enough to see
where may go
i less know
people are so focus on trying to be someone else then theirselves, that it seems as if it is a game
life is a shame
we make it hard
i'm done
i'm going to set myself new ground and a level of new bars


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Bars

Contributed by seci on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:52:30 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



if only i can define the true meaning of society i will
i realize as a person facing the world on my own, i have to be strong
people at times can be fake
i've been used strongly by my own damn friends and i still have the small little faith inside of me for heavens sake
i gave up so many times
i gave up because i felt as though i was worthless
no more than a dime
for a reason or another i look and think that it is truly a reason why i am here
why
i less know, but i must say, i live in fear
i know that everyone that smiles in your face is not your friend
thats why i stand alone and by myself and on myself i depend
life to me is like a rhythem
it can stop
keep the beat and as well bring heat
i'm still here ever though i have been down so long
but i'm strong
Forgive me father, but a time like this i have to get my bags and move the hell on
i think and ask myself why do these bad things happen to me
God has my life plan
i'm going to stop worring and stop being blind but older enough to see
where may go
i less know
people are so focus on trying to be someone else then theirselves, that it seems as if it is a game
life is a shame
we make it hard
i'm done
i'm going to set myself new ground and a level of new bars






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Re: Bars (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 07:34:57 PM AEST
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:O this is so COOL
its liek a rap kinda
i LOVE this


Re: Bars (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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thanks for sharing this piece...

great self reflection!!!!

Keep hope!




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