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Array ( [sid] => 104807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black, white and gray [time] => 2005-08-31 22:18:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What if there was no tommorow
would you still enjoy today
would your life be full of colour
or just black, white and gray

As you sit there crying
and stitching up your heart
the one that he stole away
just to tear apart

Will you be fulfilled
or just an empty shell
filled with dreams beliefs and secrets
with nobody to tell

Will you look around
to see what you lost
will you see what you got
or only what it cost

Will you give away your joy
just to take away the pain
You can't have sun
without all the rain

Will you let me hold you
or will you push away
dont wait to seize tomorrow
just to forget about today [comments] => 4 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Flyinglow [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Black, white and gray

Contributed by Flyinglow on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:18:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

What if there was no tommorow
would you still enjoy today
would your life be full of colour
or just black, white and gray

As you sit there crying
and stitching up your heart
the one that he stole away
just to tear apart

Will you be fulfilled
or just an empty shell
filled with dreams beliefs and secrets
with nobody to tell

Will you look around
to see what you lost
will you see what you got
or only what it cost

Will you give away your joy
just to take away the pain
You can't have sun
without all the rain

Will you let me hold you
or will you push away
dont wait to seize tomorrow
just to forget about today

Copyright © Flyinglow ... [ 2005-08-31 22:18:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Black, white and gray (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:22:34 PM AEST
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Wow, great poem I like it, thanks for sharing with us.

Re: Black, white and gray (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:31:44 PM AEST
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Live for the moment, as if every day was tomorrow.! Great post

Brew~

Re: Black, white and gray (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 01:33:18 AM AEST
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awesome poem...!! i seriously love even my friend that doesnt like poetry likes it lol it shs like literally answering the questions lol i love the rhymes and he flow

Re: Black, white and gray (User Rating: 1 )
by djs on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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great poem, i don't know if you play any instruments, but you could turn that into an excellent song. you rock.

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