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But then it turned out to be more
And now I feel like
Such a little whore

You got what you wanted
So you decided to stay
But then in the end
I was just being played

Anything you ever told me
Was all just a lie
I know you tell her
The same exact lines

I keep thinking about you
And how you treated me
I really did love you
But I guess we just weren't meant to be
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Cheat

Contributed by undiscoveredshadow on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:23:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

At first you were just my friend
But then it turned out to be more
And now I feel like
Such a little whore

You got what you wanted
So you decided to stay
But then in the end
I was just being played

Anything you ever told me
Was all just a lie
I know you tell her
The same exact lines

I keep thinking about you
And how you treated me
I really did love you
But I guess we just weren't meant to be

Copyright © undiscoveredshadow ... [ 2005-08-31 21:23:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cheat (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:55:08 PM AEST
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great write.....im sorry that happened i hate people like that it just makes me sick....its disgusting...its happened to mehe was my bestfriend when i kept saying no to that he left and i never talked to him since...nice poem....

xoxo
Deedee,

Re: Cheat (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:31:34 PM AEST
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Yep, that is the reason why we are called dogs and pigs etc... Great poem sorry that you had this happen to you by your friend. feels like there is nothing more gut wrenching than having your friend betray you. Nothing a good baseball bat could not fix though. Take care of yourself and thanks for sharing.

Re: Cheat (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:36:14 PM AEST
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You know what...move on and know you are NOT a whore. They played you, yet you are BETTER than them. They will get played one day.and then it will turn on them. Who knows........................

Brew~

Re: Cheat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 02:52:46 AM AEST
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aww sad, I liked it though, you need to realize not all guys are like that, most are, infact probably around 99% lol, but keep looking because theres always someone out there thats falling inlove with you, and you don't even know it. Really good write, keep it up.

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