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Array ( [sid] => 10480 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Unknown [time] => 2003-01-15 16:49:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => smooth rocks collide at the bottom of a river
like an endless battle of life
that leaves a cold shiver.
timeless fights along the way
driving forces of insanity
through every waking day.

Mountains suffacate with every cold breath
trying to support life
unaware of the closeness of death
triumphs of darkness fills the sky
blinding the unknown
that passes by.


Katherine Leraye Chaffee

Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 21 [informant] => mckayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Unknown

Contributed by mckayla on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 04:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



smooth rocks collide at the bottom of a river
like an endless battle of life
that leaves a cold shiver.
timeless fights along the way
driving forces of insanity
through every waking day.

Mountains suffacate with every cold breath
trying to support life
unaware of the closeness of death
triumphs of darkness fills the sky
blinding the unknown
that passes by.


Katherine Leraye Chaffee

Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee




Copyright © mckayla ... [ 2003-01-15 16:49:47]
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Re: The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:21:25 PM AEST
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Absolutely breathtaking Katherine....just beautiful....i love it....thanks for sharing...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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And there lies the moment between life and death.

A nice write,
wordsy.


Re: The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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wow.. you put such a dark picture to things i usually see as majestic and serene


Re: The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:00:29 PM AEST
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wow, captivating words...talented writing...very thought provoking
hugs,
kara


Re: The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:11:16 PM AEST
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I really like nature the imagery yo used here, i Shivered in the river




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