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[aid] => mick
[title] => Time Heals All Wounds
[time] => 2005-08-30 20:01:46
[hometext] => Yes I am back after months of being gone. Well I read a poem in the suicide poetry section on accident and I had to write something about it.
[bodytext] => Dedicated to all those who are still moarning the loss of a loved one
I was listening to a man read his poem the other day
And through the tears I heard him say
Why did you leave me, you were my only one
I don't know what I could have done
I remembered that long ago I too once felt that way
But the scars have healed through all the mournful days
And just then I thought what if some way, some how
He did not know how to cope with these new torments now
What would he do if his feelings got too tough
What if poetry was just not enough
Would he actually consider ending it all
Over something that seems so very small
To him his world has just been ripped away
But he will find love again some how, some way
The only thing that could heal his heart is just some time
I know because that is what it took to heal mine
Time and distance is the only thing you can get
To keep that wound from again getting wet
And after it is done you will look back and say
You were never worth me feeling that way
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Time Heals All Wounds
Contributed by
Kano
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:01:46 PM in AEST
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Dedicated to all those who are still moarning the loss of a loved one
I was listening to a man read his poem the other day
And through the tears I heard him say
Why did you leave me, you were my only one
I don't know what I could have done
I remembered that long ago I too once felt that way
But the scars have healed through all the mournful days
And just then I thought what if some way, some how
He did not know how to cope with these new torments now
What would he do if his feelings got too tough
What if poetry was just not enough
Would he actually consider ending it all
Over something that seems so very small
To him his world has just been ripped away
But he will find love again some how, some way
The only thing that could heal his heart is just some time
I know because that is what it took to heal mine
Time and distance is the only thing you can get
To keep that wound from again getting wet
And after it is done you will look back and say
You were never worth me feeling that way
Copyright ©
Kano
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2005-08-30 20:01:46]
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:13:04 PM AEST
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| Extremely well written, heartfelt, but not nessecarily true, time doesn't heal all wounds, some wounds, some scars, will forever live, forever remind you of your past, some things, are just meant not to be forgotten. |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by LadyLikeAtTimes on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:21:02 PM AEST
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Excellent write, personally I do believe that time can heal wounds if you know how to cope allowing yourself to move on instead of re-living the past.
Lady |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by Rose_bud on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:52:21 PM AEST
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| wow that's deep that's real good writing |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by helzwar007 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:46:50 PM AEST
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| wow, u know what... my boyfriend has been suicidal... and he has been slowly getting worse over the two month separation we had b.c of his mother... and i just dont know what to do sometimes... :( sn:helzwar007 -sa-sa-b00ga-b00ga- |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:27:41 PM AEST
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wonderful write....let me with a glimmer of hope...
yes it take a while......but time is the only thing that does eventually mend....not suicide. |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 02:44:55 AM AEST
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You speak with experience and wisdom. I admire the style, as well, for this message is complete, without using too many words. Well said!
Andrew |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:50:21 AM AEST
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*Applauds*
This was just overwhelmingly good. Loosing someone special leaves an hollow space in your heart.
Good writing as always.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by brew on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:02:54 PM AEST
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Well that is it.....Time, yet........well...yes time. ALot do not do that, and it makes it worse, yet.....sometimes time is bad. You seem to look , and then.....Well that was letting your self know your wounds were healed.! Very nice write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by djs on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 05:41:55 PM AEST
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| great poem, you are exactly right about time healing all wounds. i really like the way you convey your message. |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by Archie on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:07:08 PM AEST
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| I like your style in this. You have mastered your skill well and your words are filled with wisdom. This is a great and honest write. |
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Re: Time Heals All Wounds
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 05:55:08 PM AEST
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great poem, but actually time does not heal all wounds. I'm speaking form experience.
"Time Heals All Wounds" is a joke.
Great poem though. I liked it. |
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