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got a hole on my soul that will never heal,
undercover
I am wanting oh yes I'm needing you
my addiction
for you is hard to conceal.
Shadows are rising
confusion reigns
memories of bloody kisses left a bad taste,
I really don't know what I wanna do
this is so Insane.

Emotionally scarred and torn
I feel you feed on my pain
I twist and fall and die and decay,
all that matters is I gotta be with you
love
has got me in chains.
My wings are broken
I can't get away
I can't even remember my name,
addicted to you and the things you do
strangely
I don't wanna escape.

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Bloody Kisses

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:04:31 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Silently screaming ever since you let me down
got a hole on my soul that will never heal,
undercover
I am wanting oh yes I'm needing you
my addiction
for you is hard to conceal.
Shadows are rising
confusion reigns
memories of bloody kisses left a bad taste,
I really don't know what I wanna do
this is so Insane.

Emotionally scarred and torn
I feel you feed on my pain
I twist and fall and die and decay,
all that matters is I gotta be with you
love
has got me in chains.
My wings are broken
I can't get away
I can't even remember my name,
addicted to you and the things you do
strangely
I don't wanna escape.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2005-08-30 13:04:31]
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Re: Bloody Kisses (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 02:15:56 PM AEST
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In a simialar situation. It's a confusing place to be. Awsome poem...

Re: Bloody Kisses (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 04:07:04 PM AEST
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Well it's sad and gory.
huggs,
emy

Re: Bloody Kisses (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 04:35:31 PM AEST
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Powerful write.

Re: Bloody Kisses (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 05:59:22 PM AEST
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Powerful piece of poetry which speaks loudly...I like this part...."love has got me in chains.
My wings are broken I can't get away
I can't even remember my name" Wow I just want to say Break Free....it sounds like your screaming to do so. I wish you peace on your journey...Great write, Laura

Re: Bloody Kisses (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:55:38 PM AEST
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I twist and fall and die and decay

Powerful line in a very emotive piece...Excellent write.

Scorp.

Re: Bloody Kisses (User Rating: 1 )
by graci on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:28:44 AM AEST
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love really is a paradox!
dunno why coz when you fall in love even if it hurts, you still want to be with the person who reigns your heart.. hmmmm.

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