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while I took all the pain
emotionally
I've been broken,
I walk in a daze with vacant eyes.
strangely waiting and anticipating for you to come back again
it's a vicious circle
I can't help myself I keep falling.
There's no escape this is my fate
I gotta have you babe
It's insane but I think I love you,
slowly my face cracks as the tears dry that explode from my eye.

Shadows are rising
confusion reigns
memeories of bloody kisses left a bad taste,
I really don't know what I wanna do
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Insane Love

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

you were taking all the pleasure
while I took all the pain
emotionally
I've been broken,
I walk in a daze with vacant eyes.
strangely waiting and anticipating for you to come back again
it's a vicious circle
I can't help myself I keep falling.
There's no escape this is my fate
I gotta have you babe
It's insane but I think I love you,
slowly my face cracks as the tears dry that explode from my eye.

Shadows are rising
confusion reigns
memeories of bloody kisses left a bad taste,
I really don't know what I wanna do

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2005-08-30 12:04:14]
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Re: Insane Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:40:56 PM AEST
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This is really sad.. I hope things work out for you...
Jenni

Re: Insane Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:21:23 PM AEST
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oh how do i know that feeling. The feeling of losing the one you love. Very sad i must say. Hope everything works out. Good write and thanks for sharing.

Re: Insane Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:33:50 PM AEST
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Very well written, an excellent job expressing your emotions. Sadly I agree that Love is insane, I know it's hard to move on at times but you have to, so that you can find true happiness.

Sonya

Re: Insane Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:42:58 PM AEST
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The many faces of luv.
Sad but written well.
U gotta cheer up. Smile, people will wonder what you've been up to.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Insane Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:49:27 AM AEST
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Your feelings flow from your heart on this write!! Very touching and well written . I hope the hurt goes away for you

Leia36

Re: Insane Love (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:52:01 PM AEST
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Wow. Relatable is an understatement. Good job expressing your emotions, and mine too!!

Scorp.

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