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Array ( [sid] => 104652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thinking of you [time] => 2005-08-29 23:17:24 [hometext] => i wrote this about my ex boyfriend...man i miss him.... [bodytext] => I look out the window
I see the sun coming up
I've been up all night thinking of you
I dont know if I'll be alright
With you away
I dont think I can live another day
Tears fall down my cheeks
Thinking of you is causing so much pain
I remember us walking down a dark street
I smile at the memory
I remember how comfortable I felt around you
I smile at the feeling
You were all I wanted
All I ever needed
You were everything
All that meant so much
Is gone now just like everything
That once went right in my life
I think about you some more
Causing alot more pain
All I have are memories
That will never fade
Its all causing so much pain
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 503 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Thinking of you

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:17:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I look out the window
I see the sun coming up
I've been up all night thinking of you
I dont know if I'll be alright
With you away
I dont think I can live another day
Tears fall down my cheeks
Thinking of you is causing so much pain
I remember us walking down a dark street
I smile at the memory
I remember how comfortable I felt around you
I smile at the feeling
You were all I wanted
All I ever needed
You were everything
All that meant so much
Is gone now just like everything
That once went right in my life
I think about you some more
Causing alot more pain
All I have are memories
That will never fade
Its all causing so much pain

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-08-29 23:17:24]
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Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 01:11:04 AM AEST
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awww sorry to hear that .
well done on the write.

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 03:25:50 PM AEST
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Love is an emotion, some what like the sun, it can be there even on a cloudy day yet preventing us from seeing it in it's true form , and while all looks pointless right now a time shall come when you and the sun shall be friends again and it's the clouds who will be crying, sorry 4 your pain . . .

Ben

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:58:59 PM AEST
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Everything will work out for the best....I promise!

*hugs and Kisses*

Kimmy

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