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Array ( [sid] => 104639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything [time] => 2005-08-29 20:47:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I knew your answer before i asked it
why do i put myself through this
i don't want to look at you
i don't want to hear you voice
i don't need another reminder you will never be mine
just make this stop
erase your memeory
take the pain away
please make it stop
forget about today
i'd give anything
can i please have
a drink of that
can i wash you down
can the razor
be any sharper
can i watch you drown
change the color of your eyes
change the heart that lies inside
change your clothes and cut your hair
move anywhere away from here
anything you need to do
so that i can learn to hate you too. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 33 [informant] => needs_change [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Everything

Contributed by needs_change on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I knew your answer before i asked it
why do i put myself through this
i don't want to look at you
i don't want to hear you voice
i don't need another reminder you will never be mine
just make this stop
erase your memeory
take the pain away
please make it stop
forget about today
i'd give anything
can i please have
a drink of that
can i wash you down
can the razor
be any sharper
can i watch you drown
change the color of your eyes
change the heart that lies inside
change your clothes and cut your hair
move anywhere away from here
anything you need to do
so that i can learn to hate you too.

Copyright © needs_change ... [ 2005-08-29 20:47:30]
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Re: Everything (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:58:56 PM AEST
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awesome write...i dont know what to say....i really like it...this is the first time i;ve been speachless...im sorry that that person doesnt feel the same way...i read this poem because of the subject it was secret love and yeah i got a secret love to...but im too scared to even talk to him...thats good that you even had the courage to talk to that person...

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