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Array ( [sid] => 104638 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => here we are [time] => 2005-08-29 20:27:44 [hometext] => here we are, to laugh and love, to second guess and; run away [bodytext] => here we are
waist to waist
tied together at the head,
theres no going left if you cant go
right
theres no innoscence to cover your sinful
fight
with bare knuckled fists
and a tooth to decay
shes gone;oblivion
is where i stand-is where i
watch;i perform the
task of the clock as
the racers rev their engines;
countdown from 3,
t-minus green, then
we will play a game of checkers to see
whos king

here we are
hand in hand
severed by our useless plans;
if only you had prayed last nite
perhaps youd regain your sight
so lets get you a new time,
and i want to see some speed,you know
(i only condescend because
i like to pretend im
important [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 43 [informant] => electrique_poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

here we are

Contributed by electrique_poet on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

here we are
waist to waist
tied together at the head,
theres no going left if you cant go
right
theres no innoscence to cover your sinful
fight
with bare knuckled fists
and a tooth to decay
shes gone;oblivion
is where i stand-is where i
watch;i perform the
task of the clock as
the racers rev their engines;
countdown from 3,
t-minus green, then
we will play a game of checkers to see
whos king

here we are
hand in hand
severed by our useless plans;
if only you had prayed last nite
perhaps youd regain your sight
so lets get you a new time,
and i want to see some speed,you know
(i only condescend because
i like to pretend im
important

Copyright © electrique_poet ... [ 2005-08-29 20:27:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: here we are (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 07:55:52 PM AEST
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i read it twice because it is very confusing and sent my head into a spin...

KarlaMarie

Re: here we are (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:28:39 PM AEST
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as the other commenter said...it was a bit confusing. but - it was still amazing...and i loved it

- Bethani -

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