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Array ( [sid] => 104610 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Comet Of Fire [time] => 2005-08-29 13:29:32 [hometext] => not a very good poem this time....sigh can't all b good [bodytext] => What have i done?
to reach lifes cruel agony
tossed to my doom
in a world full of pain.....

torn from the inside
of whats not meant to be
scorred with a pointer
a burning vision of me

sets my soul aflame
a burning comet of fire
then puts out the burning
with ice cold desire

ripping my soul
my heart and my passion
caught in the darkness
a tangeled transgression

fought for my freedoms
stand up to the pirate
who stole my forgiveness
and tossed in the pulpit

when does it matter?
what pain really means
when your staring at badder
badder focus of me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Comet Of Fire

Contributed by spazz911 on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:29:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What have i done?
to reach lifes cruel agony
tossed to my doom
in a world full of pain.....

torn from the inside
of whats not meant to be
scorred with a pointer
a burning vision of me

sets my soul aflame
a burning comet of fire
then puts out the burning
with ice cold desire

ripping my soul
my heart and my passion
caught in the darkness
a tangeled transgression

fought for my freedoms
stand up to the pirate
who stole my forgiveness
and tossed in the pulpit

when does it matter?
what pain really means
when your staring at badder
badder focus of me

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-08-29 13:29:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Comet Of Fire (User Rating: 1 )
by stellarview on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. It got your point across and was well worded.

Re: Comet Of Fire (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:08:29 PM AEST
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I like this-
Tells a story-
Always remember that anything you write is special as it is from you-
Never allow anyone,even yourself to say that your emotions are not good...
Joe

Re: Comet Of Fire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 02:49:33 PM AEST
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I can feel your agony in this poem. This was very well done!

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