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Array ( [sid] => 104600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Because of You [time] => 2005-08-29 06:38:10 [hometext] => Me and my girlfriend broke up... this is the first thing that popped into my head... leave me comments and tell me if you like.. [bodytext] => I just want to end my life
And forget about this night
I want to take that knife
And hold it tight

I want to bleed
And end this pain
Maybe do a little weed
I have nothing left to gain

My heart was broken
Into what it seems a million pieces
Theres so many words left unspoken
Now all this pain increases

You said u didn’t want to hurt me
And that you still care
Now only if you could see
I bet you couldn’t bare

Im hurting and its your fault
Theres nothing left for me
This time I wont halt
I want to be free

Friends forever that’s what u said
Then why did u end it tonight
Now this pain has spread
And I want to take flight

So this is my last saying
And I write goodbye to you all
Because there is no reason for me staying
Tonight is the night I will fall

The knife in my hand
And the tears start flowing
This is something I didn’t plan
Now my weakness is showing

My eyes start to close
And I take my last gasp of air
The blood starts to flow
And I start to tear

I say one last goodbye
And I don’t want to stay
I start to cry
and the pain has gone away
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 357 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sbhottie288 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Because of You

Contributed by sbhottie288 on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:38:10 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I just want to end my life
And forget about this night
I want to take that knife
And hold it tight

I want to bleed
And end this pain
Maybe do a little weed
I have nothing left to gain

My heart was broken
Into what it seems a million pieces
Theres so many words left unspoken
Now all this pain increases

You said u didn’t want to hurt me
And that you still care
Now only if you could see
I bet you couldn’t bare

Im hurting and its your fault
Theres nothing left for me
This time I wont halt
I want to be free

Friends forever that’s what u said
Then why did u end it tonight
Now this pain has spread
And I want to take flight

So this is my last saying
And I write goodbye to you all
Because there is no reason for me staying
Tonight is the night I will fall

The knife in my hand
And the tears start flowing
This is something I didn’t plan
Now my weakness is showing

My eyes start to close
And I take my last gasp of air
The blood starts to flow
And I start to tear

I say one last goodbye
And I don’t want to stay
I start to cry
and the pain has gone away




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Re: Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:27:17 AM AEST
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that desire to die after a break up is so clearly expressed in this, how i feel right now...well done


Re: Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:14:37 AM AEST
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this is an amazing poem. ive felt this way before ..its a horrible thing to go thru...i use to cut to so i made a similar poem...but i didnt post it on the site..well anyways keep writing, and dont harm yourself cuz its not worth it..things will work out in the end. best of luck to yas, Chrissy


Re: Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:50:18 PM AEST
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I can relate to these feelings all to well and
while it may some now that you will never
recover you WILL recover. It may take some
time but you will get over this girl and find
someone now that hopefully won't hurt you.
Keep on writing out your pain, but don't act on
it.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:54:24 PM AEST
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I know this feeling oh so very well maybe a little to well; The feeling of losing somebody you truly care about sucks. Good write and you expressed your emotions very well.


Re: Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:05:09 PM AEST
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Hey.. great write.. i know how you feel.. when my boyfrined broke up with me i thought my life was gonna end for ever... but trust me this is not a way to handle it.. Things WILL get better! you just have to have hope!




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