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Array ( [sid] => 104596 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i lost you [time] => 2005-08-29 03:20:41 [hometext] => dont feel bad k? this is just a poem....you know who im talking to [bodytext] => i lost my way
so no loose ends
nothing to hold me down
looking around the corner,
but i cant see past the bend

can i say i really loved her?
god only knows
but a hole in my heart exists
i can see the darkness shineing through

but what am i going to do
i wish you could have stayed
i tasted love
but i scared you away
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i lost you

Contributed by socialmisfit on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:20:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i lost my way
so no loose ends
nothing to hold me down
looking around the corner,
but i cant see past the bend

can i say i really loved her?
god only knows
but a hole in my heart exists
i can see the darkness shineing through

but what am i going to do
i wish you could have stayed
i tasted love
but i scared you away

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-08-29 03:20:41]
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Re: i lost you (User Rating: 1 )
by valichka on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:01:41 AM AEST
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i love this poem, really nice.

Re: i lost you (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:26:09 AM AEST
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Awww this is really sad. Hopefully you've only scared her temporarily : )
Nice job expressing yourself in this write.

Scorp.

Re: i lost you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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Hmn. The person you wrote this for might know who you're talking to, had you told them you were going to post this, but I'm confused;

"can i say i really loved her?"

. . .

"but i scared you away"

I find that this write speaks about two different people, when it concludes on the premise of one. Hopefully this (and the spelling inconsistencies) isn't a problem for them, too.

Good luck, SM.

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