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Beginning of the end

Contributed by darkscorpio on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:39:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



About to make the turn, down a path I never wanted
Decision has been made, scared as hell, but undaunted
I’ve tried for some time, to step away
From this choice of separation, put it off another day
But as time has gone on, the distance has grown
Between our heart and our minds, and the angry seeds have sown
A harvest of resentment, and an empty lonely space
That is aching in my heart, and the tears stream down my face
14 years together, but I can’t stop this anymore
It’s time to put this all aside, and close this hurtful door

08/28/05




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Re: Beginning of the end (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:47:05 PM AEST
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Nice poem!It has a great flow.Thanx for posting.


Re: Beginning of the end (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:27:16 PM AEST
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Very sad..................sometimes thats why I dont want my heart to be given............I know its the coward way out. But ppl shouldnt hurt. Sometimes it does not work..........and I beleive the key to making it work and keep, is COMMUNICATION. My opinion.

Brew~


Re: Beginning of the end (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:06:16 PM AEST
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great write in the 1st place. i loved it! and i, too, close my self off. even though it's not smart. not much i can say, 'cept i hope that everything turns out okay for you soon! great write, keep it up!

~sprints


Re: Beginning of the end (User Rating: 1 )
by BethB88 on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:03:13 AM AEST
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The first two lines have a powerful rhythm, the poem is very much in a style I enjoy. Well done ~!




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