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The ultimate superhero
Contributed by
perfectly_flawed
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Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 06:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want to be a drop of rain
and just melt into the ground.
Be the tear in your eye
that turns to glass
and slashes your eyes.
I want to be the bullet
in your head when you kill yourself
the slits in your wrists
the pills in your tongue.
Be a part of you
The ultimate superhero
that saves you from the villain
called this world.
I want to be part of you
be your death
your damnation.
Just go to another hell
where I will be a drop of rain.
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perfectly_flawed
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2005-08-28 18:14:56]
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Re: The ultimate superhero
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by Archie on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 06:59:14 PM AEST
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| That is an interesting write. Thanks but bo thanks |
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Re: The ultimate superhero
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 10:29:37 PM AEST
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yes, it's interesting and powerful and a good write, keep it up!
~sprints |
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Re: The ultimate superhero
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:04:28 PM AEST
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| i really liked this one kristy. you want to be someone's relief from the world. your structure, rythem and rhyme were great. keep it up! i'll be waiting for more. |
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