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Array ( [sid] => 104545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Set Free [time] => 2005-08-28 11:54:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I hope you remember the good times
That will be what crosses my mind

We thought it would be a never ending fantasy
But all it did was end in tragedy

Lets not talk of the last days
Lets not say what we need to say

Live in fantasy, if only in my mind
I wish this is something you could find

Bring up the bad, and forget the good
Left me hanging, left me where I stood

But lets forget that, and remember the light
Why do you always have to start another fight

All you do is bring me down
I'm leaving this ghost town

Nothing I say will make a difference
I feel like a slave from Deliverance

I've already moved on
While still you sing the same song

Shackles of the past are binding
But mistakes I've made I guess are blinding

They are blinding you from seeing me
Seeing that I've been set free [comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 52 [informant] => CrazyCowboy557 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Set Free

Contributed by CrazyCowboy557 on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:54:59 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I hope you remember the good times
That will be what crosses my mind

We thought it would be a never ending fantasy
But all it did was end in tragedy

Lets not talk of the last days
Lets not say what we need to say

Live in fantasy, if only in my mind
I wish this is something you could find

Bring up the bad, and forget the good
Left me hanging, left me where I stood

But lets forget that, and remember the light
Why do you always have to start another fight

All you do is bring me down
I'm leaving this ghost town

Nothing I say will make a difference
I feel like a slave from Deliverance

I've already moved on
While still you sing the same song

Shackles of the past are binding
But mistakes I've made I guess are blinding

They are blinding you from seeing me
Seeing that I've been set free




Copyright © CrazyCowboy557 ... [ 2005-08-28 11:54:59]
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Re: Set Free (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 02:45:59 AM AEST
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Normally the rhyming thing doesnt normally work! But you have done a very good job at it!




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