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Array ( [sid] => 104540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deep Brown eyes [time] => 2005-08-28 09:34:25 [hometext] => going thru a break up is hard [bodytext] => I love you why do you want me to hurt so bad,
I love you , you told me you loved me too,
I love you, you said we’d always be together,
I love you , but your just making me blue.

I dunno what I did to you that you have to go ahead and do this to me,
I thought maybe I found the guy I wanted to be with forever and a day.
But then of course school is starting so your scared we will find new people.
But I love you, id never do anything like that to you, ive cheated in the past, for you,
This whole situation is all screwed up.

Are we ever gonna be able to be a couple in the future, or is it over?
Are we still gonna be good friends? Maybe friends with benefits?
This is breaking my heart. Knowing that your having second thoughts,after all our memories together. I love you theres nothing that’s gonna stop my feelings for yew.

This is killing me, you said youd never hurt me but you are now.
why , why would you do this to me after all the times we just sat on the phone for hours talking. why would you do this to me after holding my hand and rubbing my fingers, making me want the moment to never end, why would you wrap your arm around my waist letting every1 know im yours if yew never really had feelings for me…

Wait, do yew still have feelings for me? I love yew. I tell yew it all the time, but I guess when yew said it back to me it was a lie. Or just maybe yew think im gonna meet someone new and dump yew for him, well hun im not like that, I love yew, remember when I told yew how I cut and yew said don’t its discusting and I don’t wanna lose yew, and man that’s gotta hurt. And yew made me promise that id never cut again. Well yew broke your promise that we’d always be together, now I hve every reason to break my promise, since yew broke yours.

Remember when we discussed what we would do if either of us died and I said id cry my heart out cause I love yew, id never stop crying, and then yew said yew’d be so upset that yew’d laugh and then burst into tears, and when yew went to my gravestone you’d mark your territory, so forever id be yours…that’s not gonna happen …I love yew and I cant stop thinking bout everything in the future, we as a couple, coulda looked forward too.
I love yew and I know deep within those brown eyes yew love me too.
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Deep Brown eyes

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:34:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I love you why do you want me to hurt so bad,
I love you , you told me you loved me too,
I love you, you said we’d always be together,
I love you , but your just making me blue.

I dunno what I did to you that you have to go ahead and do this to me,
I thought maybe I found the guy I wanted to be with forever and a day.
But then of course school is starting so your scared we will find new people.
But I love you, id never do anything like that to you, ive cheated in the past, for you,
This whole situation is all screwed up.

Are we ever gonna be able to be a couple in the future, or is it over?
Are we still gonna be good friends? Maybe friends with benefits?
This is breaking my heart. Knowing that your having second thoughts,after all our memories together. I love you theres nothing that’s gonna stop my feelings for yew.

This is killing me, you said youd never hurt me but you are now.
why , why would you do this to me after all the times we just sat on the phone for hours talking. why would you do this to me after holding my hand and rubbing my fingers, making me want the moment to never end, why would you wrap your arm around my waist letting every1 know im yours if yew never really had feelings for me…

Wait, do yew still have feelings for me? I love yew. I tell yew it all the time, but I guess when yew said it back to me it was a lie. Or just maybe yew think im gonna meet someone new and dump yew for him, well hun im not like that, I love yew, remember when I told yew how I cut and yew said don’t its discusting and I don’t wanna lose yew, and man that’s gotta hurt. And yew made me promise that id never cut again. Well yew broke your promise that we’d always be together, now I hve every reason to break my promise, since yew broke yours.

Remember when we discussed what we would do if either of us died and I said id cry my heart out cause I love yew, id never stop crying, and then yew said yew’d be so upset that yew’d laugh and then burst into tears, and when yew went to my gravestone you’d mark your territory, so forever id be yours…that’s not gonna happen …I love yew and I cant stop thinking bout everything in the future, we as a couple, coulda looked forward too.
I love yew and I know deep within those brown eyes yew love me too.




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Re: Deep Brown eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by shasay on Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 02:26:30 AM AEST
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sounds mor like a note than a poem

its all good though sorry about the bf dont be hurting ur self ovr a guy though guys are very cruel sometimes im sorry hun




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