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Array ( [sid] => 104486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOVING YOU [time] => 2005-08-27 12:04:27 [hometext] => LOVING HIM IS SO HARD (LOVE YOU HARD HOWIE) [bodytext] => it is so hard to tell someone how you feel
you try to tell your friends to get the hard part out
but when ever that one guy passes by your friends see how hurt you are inside
they try to make me smile but everyday i still weap out his name
why cant i tell him how much he means to me
when i see him sitting by himself i wanted to reach over and give him my hand
my hand to hold when ever he feels down
but most of all i wanted to give him my heart to hold in the palm of his hand

i know this does not make sense but it how i feel in every word

I LOVE YOU HARD HOWIE (NICKNAME) [comments] => 6 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 33 [informant] => dreaming-of-your-love [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

LOVING YOU

Contributed by dreaming-of-your-love on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:04:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

it is so hard to tell someone how you feel
you try to tell your friends to get the hard part out
but when ever that one guy passes by your friends see how hurt you are inside
they try to make me smile but everyday i still weap out his name
why cant i tell him how much he means to me
when i see him sitting by himself i wanted to reach over and give him my hand
my hand to hold when ever he feels down
but most of all i wanted to give him my heart to hold in the palm of his hand

i know this does not make sense but it how i feel in every word

I LOVE YOU HARD HOWIE (NICKNAME)

Copyright © dreaming-of-your-love ... [ 2005-08-27 12:04:27]
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Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 04:26:42 PM AEST
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Very sweet poem, sometimes it is hard to tell a person how you feel, but then again it is also a good train of thought for your mind, because everytime you try to tell that person how you feel you pull back, but one day your mind and your body will get tired of holding those feelings back for the person you have had so long that one day you will walk up to the person and talk to them, then you will let it all out without actually trying to. Good luck with your love. HugGLes SLipSiX. The-brokn-rose.

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 09:46:15 PM AEST
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I am not trying to sound mean but just to let you know...you drop the e in the love before adding the ing...loving. And no the second to the last line..."i know this dose not make seens but it how I feel in every word" doesn't make much sense... Did you mean...I know this does not make sense but it's how I feel with every word? I've never heard the expression...I love you hard....Interesting. Peace, Laura

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:38:36 AM AEST
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Oh, Steph, this is so heartfelt! Some day the right guy will find you and Love will be wonderful instead of painful. Trust me, I know what a wonderful person (and funny) you are. And, what's to not make sense? It makes perfect sense to me. Very touching write. Write on!
Luv Ya!
Gramma Thumps ;o)

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Kami on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:49:16 PM AEST
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cute poem and I must say it makes perfect sense to me! It exactly how I feel!

great poem!

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 06:07:01 PM AEST
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nice write

Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 06:07:27 PM AEST
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nice write

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