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The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the room
The unsuspecting victim
Wish you would come and find me
And lie down here beside me
and in the night we'll wish this never ends
we'll wish this never ends

Don't waste your time on me
You're already the voice inside my head
I miss you

I cannot sleep, I cannot dream tonight
I need somebody and always
This sick strange darkness comes creeping on, so haunting every time
And as I stared I counted
The webs from all the spiders
Catching things and eating their insides
Like the indecision to call you
And hear your voice of reason
Will you come home and stop this pain tonight
Stop the pain tonight

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The voice inside my head

Contributed by reecy on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Hello there,
The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the room
The unsuspecting victim
Wish you would come and find me
And lie down here beside me
and in the night we'll wish this never ends
we'll wish this never ends

Don't waste your time on me
You're already the voice inside my head
I miss you

I cannot sleep, I cannot dream tonight
I need somebody and always
This sick strange darkness comes creeping on, so haunting every time
And as I stared I counted
The webs from all the spiders
Catching things and eating their insides
Like the indecision to call you
And hear your voice of reason
Will you come home and stop this pain tonight
Stop the pain tonight

Copyright © reecy ... [ 2005-08-27 10:10:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The voice inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:43:59 PM AEST
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Great poem!It is deep...rich with emotion,and the words are strong.Keep writing!

Re: The voice inside my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:40:16 PM AEST
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A thought provoking write you have here Lauren. Filled with deep and sad emotions.
I hope that all is well with you. Chin up sweet girl.
*heartfelt hugs*
Sue

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