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Array ( [sid] => 104477 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ive still got it. [time] => 2005-08-27 04:45:10 [hometext] => This is to my biological brother, Brandon Birdsong, or Tyler Dryden, (whichever name he chose when he left us) [bodytext] => Do you remember
my seventh Christmas?
The one you were never there for...

The last thing you sent me
it sits on my shelf
glaring from above.

You said youd be back.
You said you loved us...
Yet you left us,
so alone.

I dream every night
of what you might look like
but a dream, is only a dream.

Will I ever see your face?
Will I ever touch your hand;
or tell you that I love you...
hug you and kiss you?

I still see you as my boy brother
yet I know youll be back a man [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Ive still got it.

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 04:45:10 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Do you remember
my seventh Christmas?
The one you were never there for...

The last thing you sent me
it sits on my shelf
glaring from above.

You said youd be back.
You said you loved us...
Yet you left us,
so alone.

I dream every night
of what you might look like
but a dream, is only a dream.

Will I ever see your face?
Will I ever touch your hand;
or tell you that I love you...
hug you and kiss you?

I still see you as my boy brother
yet I know youll be back a man

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2005-08-27 04:45:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ive still got it. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:19:22 PM AEST
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Oh, this is so tragic!! I am so sorry for your loss, and hopefully, one day your brother will come home...I like the way you wrote this piece, and expressed yourself. Good job.

Scorp.

Re: Ive still got it. (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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This is a very moving piece. I only turned my hand to writing poetry a few months ago, so really I know very little about the genre, but this poem was very touching in my opinion.

Colin

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