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Array ( [sid] => 104459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Step Back [time] => 2005-08-26 22:15:42 [hometext] => yep [bodytext] => distracted
step back
fall down
crash and burn

when you step outside yourself
open for all those thoughts

no one there will help you
to toss out truth from fate

only solid judgement
is staring in your face

continually moving
trying to keep calm

because what your seeing
is dangerously near

dont look too long
the truth is hard to bare

just glance then run
or you will never breath again

distracted
step back
fall down
crash and burn

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 61 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Step Back

Contributed by spazz911 on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

distracted
step back
fall down
crash and burn

when you step outside yourself
open for all those thoughts

no one there will help you
to toss out truth from fate

only solid judgement
is staring in your face

continually moving
trying to keep calm

because what your seeing
is dangerously near

dont look too long
the truth is hard to bare

just glance then run
or you will never breath again

distracted
step back
fall down
crash and burn

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-08-26 22:15:42]
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Re: Step Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Mara on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:44:58 AM AEST
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wow, this is powerful, i like it.

Re: Step Back (User Rating: 1 )
by starry_eyed_soul on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 01:57:00 AM AEST
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another great write casey....

Re: Step Back (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:29:32 PM AEST
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good write, kc. very powerful. i liked this one. and so you took my advise to come back. lol. take care, friend and keep up the good work.

~sprints

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