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It’s a heart you won’t see
My heart’s been torn apart bit-by-bit
Taking on all sorts of blows and hits
Soon all that was left was a tiny piece
That you destroyed and killed with ease
Sp soon it’s just an empty space
And of my heart, there’s not a trace
Not that space is turning black
With all angriness at my back
And with all this pain and crap,
It’s turning into a swirling death trap
What was once a heart that was whole
Is now a screaming, spinning black hole
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Black Hole

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 05:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

If you look inside of me,
It’s a heart you won’t see
My heart’s been torn apart bit-by-bit
Taking on all sorts of blows and hits
Soon all that was left was a tiny piece
That you destroyed and killed with ease
Sp soon it’s just an empty space
And of my heart, there’s not a trace
Not that space is turning black
With all angriness at my back
And with all this pain and crap,
It’s turning into a swirling death trap
What was once a heart that was whole
Is now a screaming, spinning black hole

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-08-26 17:23:03]
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Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 05:28:38 PM AEST
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emotional write calling out your pain. So very moving. Im sorry for your pain
Michelle

Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 05:42:06 PM AEST
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Go visit the wizard of oz...he'll hook you up; )

Joking aside, this is a very emotive piece of poetry here Sprints...Lots of pain in your words, and your loss is felt. Good job, and keep your chin up.

Scorp.

Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentPwn on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 05:57:49 PM AEST
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Mm. I could really feel your pain through this, awesome write. Nice way of expressing your emotions.
//kristen

Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:35:43 PM AEST
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Very expressive write, I feel you on this and can totally relate , dont let your heart get hard, and keep your head held high...

Leia36

Re: Black Hole (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 07:41:46 PM AEST
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Really nice metaphor. I like it. The title kinda caught my eye too! This is a really good poem! Well...ya know. lol 6/5 ^^ hehe.
Peace,
Agent Bones

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