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Array ( [sid] => 104431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ode of a Summer Song [time] => 2005-08-26 12:46:47 [hometext] => This is my very first attempt at poetry. [bodytext] =>
Over yonder comes the summer
Full of rhythm, awe, and wonder
Birds fly past to raze the treetops
Soaring higher, reaching star drops

Remnants of forgotten worlds
Of flowing colors, star shine whirls
Dreams caress a soulful flurry
Held by nature, judge and jury

Only past and future fades
While present never slips away
Lying gently, tufts of grass
Calm envelopes, troubles pass


As tulips spread across the field
The sunshine lowers, daylight yields
To nighttime dreams, of softer things
Of silver arches, golden wings

Of creatures of a world unknown
Imagination stirs and grows
And melodies which sooth one’s soul
Can strengthen love as truth unfolds

And old ways die while new are born
Revealing roses without thorns
The spirit soars and then decides
To dream again upon sunrise

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Ode of a Summer Song

Contributed by hunterj2k on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:46:47 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry




Over yonder comes the summer
Full of rhythm, awe, and wonder
Birds fly past to raze the treetops
Soaring higher, reaching star drops

Remnants of forgotten worlds
Of flowing colors, star shine whirls
Dreams caress a soulful flurry
Held by nature, judge and jury

Only past and future fades
While present never slips away
Lying gently, tufts of grass
Calm envelopes, troubles pass


As tulips spread across the field
The sunshine lowers, daylight yields
To nighttime dreams, of softer things
Of silver arches, golden wings

Of creatures of a world unknown
Imagination stirs and grows
And melodies which sooth one’s soul
Can strengthen love as truth unfolds

And old ways die while new are born
Revealing roses without thorns
The spirit soars and then decides
To dream again upon sunrise





Copyright © hunterj2k ... [ 2005-08-26 12:46:47]
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Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:56:44 PM AEST
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For your first time you did an exceptional write. I enjoyed this immensely and welcome to YPDC


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:06:12 PM AEST
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This is lovely...Really good flow. Keep them coming...
Jenni


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:33:54 PM AEST
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Wonderful job for a first write! I thought it very expressive and full of description and promise. Keep it up!

Jennifer


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:46:23 PM AEST
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A masterpiece! I dont believe you though your first poem I think your teasing me!! If not we all better get out of the way* smiles*
Welcome to YPDC it will be nice to read more of your work!
Michelle


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 02:54:55 PM AEST
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this was a great poem for your first write keep it up!!!


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:48:21 PM AEST
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Very good write-
Flowing smoothly-
Keep on with the pen-
Joe


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:49:54 PM AEST
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Wow! This is a brilliant , and captivating, I love the last two versus!!!!! 'welcome to ypdc!

Leia36


Re: Ode of a Summer Song (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:51:22 AM AEST
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Sometimes the rhythm felt a little prolonged, does that make sense? But... I think that's just me tonight moreso than your poem. A very happy first write. Very imaginative, too.

Love and peace,

Chelsea




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