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Array ( [sid] => 104425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Come the Dawn [time] => 2005-08-26 09:16:00 [hometext] => Inspired by a phrase I read in a book. This is different from my usual stuff. [bodytext] => Come the dawn,

I will be complete
I'll be no man's pawn.

Come the dawn,

A new sun will break
and melt the ice round my heart.

Come the dawn,

My broken soul mends
I'll love with no end.

Come the dawn,

My life will start over
We'll cherish each other.

Come the dawn,

All sins are forgiven
I can't wait to start.

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Come the Dawn

Contributed by anitajames on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:16:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Come the dawn,

I will be complete
I'll be no man's pawn.

Come the dawn,

A new sun will break
and melt the ice round my heart.

Come the dawn,

My broken soul mends
I'll love with no end.

Come the dawn,

My life will start over
We'll cherish each other.

Come the dawn,

All sins are forgiven
I can't wait to start.

Copyright © anitajames ... [ 2005-08-26 09:16:00]
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Re: Come the Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:46:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful not givig up and starting over poem. Wonderful read. Thanks..........Mike

Re: Come the Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:37:24 AM AEST
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Simple and true faith is what I see in this poem. Great write.

Re: Come the Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 11:08:35 AM AEST
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Very postive and uplifting. Nice work!

Jennifer

Re: Come the Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:32:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful work. I love the hopefulness, and the sense of Light and renewal. Good work!

Andrew

Re: Come the Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 06:53:51 PM AEST
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Sometimes the words are there but need a push-
Inspiration is onlythe pushing of your own emotions to action-
Keep reading as this is a great write with lots of strength and conviction-
The pleasure was all mine as I read:
Joe

Re: Come the Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:23:52 AM AEST
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I'm glad Hope stayed. This is one of your best, I think. If nothing else, one of my favorites.
Take care.
David

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