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Array ( [sid] => 104424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Growing Distance [time] => 2005-08-26 09:12:06 [hometext] => I HATE THIS! [bodytext] => My heart hardly beats
Waiting for the next fall
My stomach churns and heats
I wish you’d just call

I don’t understand
I only feel the loss
No touch of your hand
With me, you seem cross

There’s been no falling out
Have you met another?
What’s it all about?
What’s happened to my lover?

Why can’t you just tell me?
What is it that you’ve lost?
A helper, I could be
Just for you, at no cost

You know how I feel
I hope that’s not the problem
My fate you may seal
A flower, no longer to blossom

My heart is tied to you
Without you it has no purpose
Have you not a clue,
Why I’ve become so anxious?

Slowly it develops
Each time you hold back
The emptiness which envelops
Intimacy starts to lack

I feel the withdrawing
Probably from the start
By the time I see where you’re going,
I can spare not the injury to my heart!

What is going on?
I just don’t get it!
Why have you gone?
To whom or what belongs the credit?

The slow tearing is unbearable
I only want to cry
To you, am I not lovable?
Please don’t say goodbye!!!!
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ToriVeigh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Growing Distance

Contributed by ToriVeigh on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:12:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My heart hardly beats
Waiting for the next fall
My stomach churns and heats
I wish you’d just call

I don’t understand
I only feel the loss
No touch of your hand
With me, you seem cross

There’s been no falling out
Have you met another?
What’s it all about?
What’s happened to my lover?

Why can’t you just tell me?
What is it that you’ve lost?
A helper, I could be
Just for you, at no cost

You know how I feel
I hope that’s not the problem
My fate you may seal
A flower, no longer to blossom

My heart is tied to you
Without you it has no purpose
Have you not a clue,
Why I’ve become so anxious?

Slowly it develops
Each time you hold back
The emptiness which envelops
Intimacy starts to lack

I feel the withdrawing
Probably from the start
By the time I see where you’re going,
I can spare not the injury to my heart!

What is going on?
I just don’t get it!
Why have you gone?
To whom or what belongs the credit?

The slow tearing is unbearable
I only want to cry
To you, am I not lovable?
Please don’t say goodbye!!!!




Copyright © ToriVeigh ... [ 2005-08-26 09:12:06]
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Re: Growing Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:27:38 AM AEST
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i don't know why you hate this poem so much! i found this poem very moving! you must care for this person very much to write a poem about how you feel! very good write well done
all my love
jenny
xxx


Re: Growing Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:48:10 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Very deep and full of emotion.........Mike


Re: Growing Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:35:36 AM AEST
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I wish I had words to help you get through this but I don't. The pain of lost love is very hard to bear.


Re: Growing Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by shae on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:42:11 AM AEST
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wow! this poem has my emotions hidden between every single line. im in the exact same position and this poem just helps me to know that im not the only one out there. you did an excellent job. your not alone.


Re: Growing Distance (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:54:49 AM AEST
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I literally feel exactly the same way.
I'll pray for yours to work out as well as mine.
Just hold on, okay?

Love and peace,

Chelsea




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