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Array ( [sid] => 104410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => zombies like YOU............. [time] => 2005-08-26 00:43:23 [hometext] => walking the highway singing my song [bodytext] => lost in stone my walls that surround
looking for my spirit that is not found
lost in a void my vision so black
screaming at sorrow my world slowly cracks

wandering my country back pack and all
seeing the people hiding in there walls
soulless and pale a city of sin
the same zombies walk no matter what town your in
no spirit no soul blinded by cash
wanting the world to see them atlast

fame and power the dream of us all
wandering society watching them fall
greed and glory the pain that binds
walking the highway in the centre line
again im lost with the people i see
wishing they all would see what i belive [comments] => 7 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

zombies like YOU.............

Contributed by lostrelic on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:43:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

lost in stone my walls that surround
looking for my spirit that is not found
lost in a void my vision so black
screaming at sorrow my world slowly cracks

wandering my country back pack and all
seeing the people hiding in there walls
soulless and pale a city of sin
the same zombies walk no matter what town your in
no spirit no soul blinded by cash
wanting the world to see them atlast

fame and power the dream of us all
wandering society watching them fall
greed and glory the pain that binds
walking the highway in the centre line
again im lost with the people i see
wishing they all would see what i belive

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-08-26 00:43:23]
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Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:01:35 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
It's good to see something new from u.
Keep writing, my friend.
huggs,
emy

Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:34:29 AM AEST
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I wrote a song similar to yours called "I want to go into that land" Your song is cool. I like the rhythym very much as well as the meaning.

"In this world we lock our doors tight
and we keep our children close
We compete against each other
to see which one can get more gold"

Quote from "I want to go into that land" by Archie Brown

Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:00:39 AM AEST
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Regan, you keep singing your song, for not all of us are zombies. Not all of us put our need or faith in material things or base our lives on it. Not all of us are racial bigots or powerful greedy non-caring people. Not all of us have sold our souls to the dark side. Some of us even realized we had and crawled out. So I beg you, sing that song, and state the wrongs and know that in truth a lot of us believe in your quest. Smiles, Dove

Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by CrazyCowboy557 on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 12:15:55 AM AEST
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I love the imagery

Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:28:47 AM AEST
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Lostrelic

The world is not the way it was ment to be.
Zombies ?
The working world grabs most all
rasing families,good citizens we see.
Difficulty.
Nature to some is a little backyard or a city park.
A drive down a country road.
Many cannot just take off and go.
A rich man may wonder and sceem.
We commoners work and dream.
Your poem is rather good.
Whoa to those who must live in a hood.
Keep writting as your talent is plentiful.

Sinned

Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:32:24 AM AEST
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Lostrelic

The world is not the way it was ment to be.
Zombies ?
The working world grabs most all
rasing families,good citizens we see.
Difficulty.
Nature to some is a little backyard or a city park.
A drive down a country road.
Many cannot just take off and go.
A rich man may wonder and sceem.
We commoners work and dream.
Your poem is rather good.
Whoa to those who must live in a hood.
Keep writting as your talent is plentiful.

Sinned

Re: zombies like YOU............. (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:51:58 AM AEST
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I love your Innervisions,there are so deep
and thought provoking.

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