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Array ( [sid] => 104399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Division [time] => 2005-08-25 21:30:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Two minds one heart, in a straight line
For many years, while ignoring the signs
Parallel existence moving forward as one
Before we realized the damage was done
Change of direction to better one part
The lines start to change, and so did the heart
Add a new line to the circle of two
Intersect the differences, not sure what to do
The lines grow more distant, direction has turned
Lines feel betrayal, hearts feeling burned
Lines start to blur as the love is erased
But the third line’s in the middle and it feels out of place
Two separate lines growing further apart
And the third line’s all that’s left in linking two minds with one heart

08/25/05
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Division

Contributed by darkscorpio on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:30:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Two minds one heart, in a straight line
For many years, while ignoring the signs
Parallel existence moving forward as one
Before we realized the damage was done
Change of direction to better one part
The lines start to change, and so did the heart
Add a new line to the circle of two
Intersect the differences, not sure what to do
The lines grow more distant, direction has turned
Lines feel betrayal, hearts feeling burned
Lines start to blur as the love is erased
But the third line’s in the middle and it feels out of place
Two separate lines growing further apart
And the third line’s all that’s left in linking two minds with one heart

08/25/05

Copyright Â© darkscorpio ... [ 2005-08-25 21:30:49]
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Re: Division (User Rating: 1 )
by 68birdls1 on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:49:06 PM AEST
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i know exactly how you feel! great write

Re: Division (User Rating: 1 )
by forsaken_soul33 on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 09:52:45 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. I liked the rhyme scheme, it just seemed to flow as I read it. I can relate to how you feel. I to usually feel like the line in the middle. Great write. Keep it up.

bye,
☺Mando☺

Re: Division (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:49:37 AM AEST
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i think you would be a great writer of rebelious poetry

Re: Division (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 03:36:17 PM AEST
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Relatable, good job, keep it up.

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