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Array ( [sid] => 104391 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For the best person EVER. [time] => 2005-08-25 18:28:46 [hometext] => To THE best person alive....Thank you, for everything [bodytext] => Where is my rain?
So I can hide my pain.

these chains are unbrakable,
This pain is unbarable.
These tears I cannot hide anymore.

But the love you show
Takes all that away.
You change the clouds in my sky
From being grey.

You turn the darkness
Into day.

You mend a heart,
Once broken apart.

You dry these tears,
And help me push back my fears.

Your jacket on my back,
I feel safe and warm.

Your hands my shoulders hold,
You have been the strength I've lacked,
You turned away the cold,
And I still trust in you
To hold me
Until I can stand alone.

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For the best person EVER.

Contributed by lostwithoutyou on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Where is my rain?
So I can hide my pain.

these chains are unbrakable,
This pain is unbarable.
These tears I cannot hide anymore.

But the love you show
Takes all that away.
You change the clouds in my sky
From being grey.

You turn the darkness
Into day.

You mend a heart,
Once broken apart.

You dry these tears,
And help me push back my fears.

Your jacket on my back,
I feel safe and warm.

Your hands my shoulders hold,
You have been the strength I've lacked,
You turned away the cold,
And I still trust in you
To hold me
Until I can stand alone.

Copyright © lostwithoutyou ... [ 2005-08-25 18:28:46]
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Re: For the best person EVER. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:45:14 PM AEST
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Great poem. I am glad I have close friends in my life. I don't know how much trouble I would be in if it wasn't for the help and honesty of a true friend.

Re: For the best person EVER. (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:55:40 PM AEST
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Hello Lostwithoutyou,
This is a great poem, I sure wished my writing was half as good as this one is. You did a great job. Keep up the great writing. Good to know you have someone there to help you through the hard times.
Tammi aka poet70

Re: For the best person EVER. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:11:06 PM AEST
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A very beautiful sweet poem, you're lucky to have somebody like that in your life. SLipSiX.

Re: For the best person EVER. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:50:22 AM AEST
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Hey... you're welcome Brina. Thank you for your kind words. God said to love, and one way to do that is to help those who need it. If anything I do is worthy of praise, it's because He did it first. Praise the Potter for the mass of clay.
Take care.
David

Re: For the best person EVER. (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:50:24 AM AEST
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Hey... you're welcome Brina. Thank you for your kind words. God said to love, and one way to do that is to help those who need it. If anything I do is worthy of praise, it's because He did it first. Praise the Potter for the mass of clay.
Take care.
David

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