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Array ( [sid] => 104383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Might be Worth it. [time] => 2005-08-25 17:53:18 [hometext] => I Might be Worth it. [bodytext] => Dont look at me with those eyes.
Dont give me that adoring smile.
Dont tell me that you love me.
Im not worth your while.

Im only a sad little girl,
souls shattered into pieces;
broken heart from so many unloved loves
and never to be mended.

Every unloved love pulls at my heart
shattering it,
breaking it,
pulling it apart.

How can I see it?
The real thing.
Ive already screwed up so many times
I believe Ill never know it.

Yet looking into your eyes,
seeing your adoring smile
I live for hope
that I might be worth your while. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

I Might be Worth it.

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:53:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Dont look at me with those eyes.
Dont give me that adoring smile.
Dont tell me that you love me.
Im not worth your while.

Im only a sad little girl,
souls shattered into pieces;
broken heart from so many unloved loves
and never to be mended.

Every unloved love pulls at my heart
shattering it,
breaking it,
pulling it apart.

How can I see it?
The real thing.
Ive already screwed up so many times
I believe Ill never know it.

Yet looking into your eyes,
seeing your adoring smile
I live for hope
that I might be worth your while.

Copyright © Shattered_soul ... [ 2005-08-25 17:53:18]
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Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnannon on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:54:48 PM AEST
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I feel like you've stepped inside my head and written exactly what I think all the time. Amazing write! Keep up the good work!

Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:16:01 PM AEST
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very good write. I know this feeling a little to well and know exactly know how you feel b/c i am going through something like this. Hope everything works out. Good luck

Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:40:21 PM AEST
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"And so you say your life is over
and nothing i can say will change your mind
How can anybody be so selfish and treat you oh so cruel
Go on and scream at me and cry
I'll always hold you in my soul
and I'm never gonna leave you all alone
but your daddy doesn't live here anymore"

Excerpt from "The real thing" By Kenny Loggins

I think your poem is great and I think the words to the song I quoted is why you should let true love come to you.

Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by forsaken_soul33 on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 10:00:16 PM AEST
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Love is hard to find. And when you find it, do your best to never let it go. Great write.

bye,
☺Mando☺

Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:53:02 AM AEST
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dont listen to kenny loggins i liked your poem it has a nice style to it

Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 09:07:25 AM AEST
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The way I see it, if it comes our way, we are worth it. Great write and keep your hope............Mike

Re: I Might be Worth it. (User Rating: 1 )
by Hybridasher on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:22:53 AM AEST
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I really like this poem alot.

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