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Array ( [sid] => 10435 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Abyss [time] => 2003-01-14 23:20:00 [hometext] => Eh, I hope no one is offended by this poem. If you are I apologize. [bodytext] => Sinking into a Black Abyss
Empty and void
Life's meaningless
Becoming annoyed
With the smiles everyday
Plastered on faces
As they go their own way
To their daily places
Where is this motivation
That shows this love
And dedication
To this "God" above
I don't see
How you can have faith
How to believe
In a word made by hate
Manufactured society
Believe what they're told
Put an end to this finally
Let the bodies lie cold
Amidst the light mist
So-called Judgement Day
Their lips have kissed
The last sunshine ray
For there is nowhere to go
No Heaven no Hell,Nothing it's *****
Just an endless black hole
A dark lonely abyss... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MalevolentDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Abyss

Contributed by MalevolentDreamer on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Sinking into a Black Abyss
Empty and void
Life's meaningless
Becoming annoyed
With the smiles everyday
Plastered on faces
As they go their own way
To their daily places
Where is this motivation
That shows this love
And dedication
To this "God" above
I don't see
How you can have faith
How to believe
In a word made by hate
Manufactured society
Believe what they're told
Put an end to this finally
Let the bodies lie cold
Amidst the light mist
So-called Judgement Day
Their lips have kissed
The last sunshine ray
For there is nowhere to go
No Heaven no Hell,Nothing it's *****
Just an endless black hole
A dark lonely abyss...



Copyright © MalevolentDreamer ... [ 2003-01-14 23:20:00]
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Re: Abyss (User Rating: 1 )
by Jade on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 12:40:51 AM AEST
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I can definalty relate to feeling this way towards believing in the so called "god." Sometimes I get disgusted in how so blindly people will follow someone preaching "the word"




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