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Array ( [sid] => 104338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LIFE to me as it is [time] => 2005-08-24 20:51:41 [hometext] => OKAY THIS IS WHAT I KINDA THINK OF LIFE [bodytext] => Why is it in life that when things seem soo big turn out soo small to me and when I see something I want or need it never seem real enough to me. Something always seem wrong to me and the only way to fix it is to wonder but when I wonder it seem to come alive and become a bad feeling that can never go away and if it does go away it always falls back into my life and breaks it more and more. I have always told myself jump for your dreams they will always catch you when you start to fall but more and more I seem to think that it's not real anymore and everthing in life is fake but I still have hope that memories are something to remember and something to be proud of not something to be afriad of a hide from. if in life when I fall I just stay down and never try to get up but if you know friend that falls and always get up i have noticed that life can get better only if ur heart is true

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LIFE to me as it is

Contributed by LovinSweetHeartGirl2011 on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Why is it in life that when things seem soo big turn out soo small to me and when I see something I want or need it never seem real enough to me. Something always seem wrong to me and the only way to fix it is to wonder but when I wonder it seem to come alive and become a bad feeling that can never go away and if it does go away it always falls back into my life and breaks it more and more. I have always told myself jump for your dreams they will always catch you when you start to fall but more and more I seem to think that it's not real anymore and everthing in life is fake but I still have hope that memories are something to remember and something to be proud of not something to be afriad of a hide from. if in life when I fall I just stay down and never try to get up but if you know friend that falls and always get up i have noticed that life can get better only if ur heart is true

~*stormy*~




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Re: LIFE to me as it is (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:06:00 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem, I have often felt the same way about life, though sometimes life can seem totaly pointless yet you keep striving. SLipSiX.


Re: LIFE to me as it is (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:04:10 PM AEST
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that falls and always get up i have noticed that life can get better only if ur heart is true

These last lines says it all.
good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: LIFE to me as it is (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:09:16 PM AEST
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Girl you so got it. These words say so much about me as well. Keep the writing and good luck.




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