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Array ( [sid] => 104330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Serenity in You [time] => 2005-08-24 19:17:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My confusion bridges the ageless gap between chaos and serenity
And leads me to ask the question of what this life could ever be
Uncertainty undresses me and leaves me naked in your waking eye
it undoes all possibilities and leads me to ask you why:

why I tremble at the slightest touch and pray that you won't feel
why I close my eyes each night in fear that none of this is real
why I watch you walk away each time and wait til you look back
I don't know how many times you haven't - enough that I've lost track

And I don't know when you will look back, or even if you'll stay
But I do promise to wait til then and never look away
So many times I've lost myself in a life I watched pass by
In memories that strangled me, winds that refused to die

Now I'm waiting for the current that will carry me to you,
that will never let me look back and release everything I knew
And I'm waiting for tomorrow, for a life that's yet to be
I'm waiting for my confusion to lead me to serenity [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Unbreakable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Serenity in You

Contributed by Unbreakable on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 07:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My confusion bridges the ageless gap between chaos and serenity
And leads me to ask the question of what this life could ever be
Uncertainty undresses me and leaves me naked in your waking eye
it undoes all possibilities and leads me to ask you why:

why I tremble at the slightest touch and pray that you won't feel
why I close my eyes each night in fear that none of this is real
why I watch you walk away each time and wait til you look back
I don't know how many times you haven't - enough that I've lost track

And I don't know when you will look back, or even if you'll stay
But I do promise to wait til then and never look away
So many times I've lost myself in a life I watched pass by
In memories that strangled me, winds that refused to die

Now I'm waiting for the current that will carry me to you,
that will never let me look back and release everything I knew
And I'm waiting for tomorrow, for a life that's yet to be
I'm waiting for my confusion to lead me to serenity

Copyright © Unbreakable ... [ 2005-08-24 19:17:35]
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Re: Serenity in You (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:59:15 PM AEST
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That was good, I liked the ending most of all. Seemed to bring
it to such a good conclusion. Awesome job.

~Kara~~Waos~

Re: Serenity in You (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 10:25:33 PM AEST
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Wow. Amazing. Just...amazing.

I'm kind of speechless here. The attention to rhyme, the thoughts, it was all just so good. Amazing job with this!

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