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Array ( [sid] => 104325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unhappy [time] => 2005-08-24 18:01:07 [hometext] => Something I wrote back in February, I forgot to post it, so here it is...Comments pls... [bodytext] => Unhappy

Why do thoughts of you still linger
It stings my heart like a bee’s stinger
Why does it kill me when you’re not around?
I smile no more all I do is frown

Why is it that I always want to cry?
All I think about is “when will I die?”
Why is there no happiness in my life?
The only there is, is so much strife

I no longer have an appetite
As well as no energy left to fight
All day long all I do is sleep
Even in my dreams thoughts of you creep

I’m tired of writing these poems that are sad
Now that I think about it, it gets me so mad
Why do I depend on another to make me happy?
Happiness should be rooted in the person I call me
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Unhappy

Contributed by O7NeVeS on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:01:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Unhappy

Why do thoughts of you still linger
It stings my heart like a bee’s stinger
Why does it kill me when you’re not around?
I smile no more all I do is frown

Why is it that I always want to cry?
All I think about is “when will I die?”
Why is there no happiness in my life?
The only there is, is so much strife

I no longer have an appetite
As well as no energy left to fight
All day long all I do is sleep
Even in my dreams thoughts of you creep

I’m tired of writing these poems that are sad
Now that I think about it, it gets me so mad
Why do I depend on another to make me happy?
Happiness should be rooted in the person I call me

Copyright Â© O7NeVeS ... [ 2005-08-24 18:01:07]
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Re: Unhappy (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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Good poem, and a good thought at the end. far easier said than done though.

Re: Unhappy (User Rating: 1 )
by chanceof_promise on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:28:23 PM AEST
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"I’m tired of writing these poems that are sad
Now that I think about it, it gets me so mad
Why do I depend on another to make me happy?
Happiness should be rooted in the person I call me"
i love that..and it is really true..
good write..

Re: Unhappy (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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well i remember like it was yesterday what you were going through back then and this fits it to a T, you got through it though didn't you :) anyway, this poem was great, really sad, but still great....

curtis

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