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~~~~~
You’re an angel in distress
Struggling through another test
Holding your wings against your side
Allowing their natural beauty to hide

Your spirit is broken in two
Your skies have lost their blue
You’re devoured in the pain
Your clouds are full of rain

You question what you believe
All you do is grieve
Grounded are your wings
Your heart no longer sings

But angels weren’t meant to cry
They’re suppose to live on high
And be sheltered from the things
That pulls on the heart strings



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Angel In Distress

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Angel In Distress
~~~~~
You’re an angel in distress
Struggling through another test
Holding your wings against your side
Allowing their natural beauty to hide

Your spirit is broken in two
Your skies have lost their blue
You’re devoured in the pain
Your clouds are full of rain

You question what you believe
All you do is grieve
Grounded are your wings
Your heart no longer sings

But angels weren’t meant to cry
They’re suppose to live on high
And be sheltered from the things
That pulls on the heart strings







Copyright © Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2005-08-24 15:51:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Angel In Distress (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnannon on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:18:03 PM AEST
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great write! i love the imagery, especially the "your skies have lost their blue"
this brought up a lot of emotions for me, which is my favourite part of poetry. keep up the good work.


Re: Angel In Distress (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:50:46 PM AEST
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Good write. wow I feel like that angel in distress so many times. thanks for sharing


Re: Angel In Distress (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:43:52 AM AEST
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An interesting poem and a new angle from you. Keep them coming...
Jenni




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