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Long ago I gave you my heart
A few days have passed since we've been apart
Though you may want to hand it right back to me
My heart is yours, in your hands, for all eternity
As you hold it now it's not broken, but torn
And through abandonment has become forlorn
But, abandon's not right, it's not what you've done
Yet my heart still feels cold, misplaced and shunned
I did not cry to sleep last night, I held strong
Though I am crying now as these lines string along
I am helpless and lonely full of false hopes
And I keep pretending I know how to cope
But I know that I need you right here by my side
'Cause my heart's in your hands and without it I'll die
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Untitled

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:24:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove





Long ago I gave you my heart
A few days have passed since we've been apart
Though you may want to hand it right back to me
My heart is yours, in your hands, for all eternity
As you hold it now it's not broken, but torn
And through abandonment has become forlorn
But, abandon's not right, it's not what you've done
Yet my heart still feels cold, misplaced and shunned
I did not cry to sleep last night, I held strong
Though I am crying now as these lines string along
I am helpless and lonely full of false hopes
And I keep pretending I know how to cope
But I know that I need you right here by my side
'Cause my heart's in your hands and without it I'll die




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2005-08-24 12:24:15]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:32:09 PM AEST
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this is a really sweet poem! well written! i am so sorry that you two aren't together any more, it is very hard letting go of someone who you have to know and love! good luck, if you ever need to talk im always here
all my love hope and hugges
jenny
xx



Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:01:25 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt...and so touching..
Hope things work out for you..
Jenni


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 03:50:30 AM AEST
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Hugs, many hugs. I'm sorry....
Take care.
David

*Who now is also sad, wishing you weren't*


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:27:20 AM AEST
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Good poem! I wish that things would work
out between both of you.

Keep writing!

-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:04:39 AM AEST
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Oh CHELSEA...this is beautifully wretched. Love, so bittersweet. You're in my prayers. I know you can deal.
~Carrie~


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 02:01:42 AM AEST
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aww, poor girl *hugs you* you want me to cut out his eyeballs with a spork? Would that make you feel better?




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