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Array ( [sid] => 104271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) [time] => 2005-08-23 23:43:21 [hometext] => This poem is about my first love. [bodytext] => Next door an angel sat
In her chair every afternoon
Her jokes I laughed at
It ended much too soon

She'd walk home at four
After the bus dropped her off
She left me wanting more
The touch of her skin so soft

In my mind I walk back
To that front porch so small
I find my self getting off track
At the beginning of Fall

Nights on the trampoline
Or just sitting and talking
Her face can still be seen
My mind it's still stalking

I loved her with all my heart
She never knew
While she was tearing others apart
My love only grew

That night my heart fell flat
Lying under a harvest moon
Her chair I always sat
Her leaving like a monsoon [comments] => 6 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CrazyCowboy557 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)

Contributed by CrazyCowboy557 on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Next door an angel sat
In her chair every afternoon
Her jokes I laughed at
It ended much too soon

She'd walk home at four
After the bus dropped her off
She left me wanting more
The touch of her skin so soft

In my mind I walk back
To that front porch so small
I find my self getting off track
At the beginning of Fall

Nights on the trampoline
Or just sitting and talking
Her face can still be seen
My mind it's still stalking

I loved her with all my heart
She never knew
While she was tearing others apart
My love only grew

That night my heart fell flat
Lying under a harvest moon
Her chair I always sat
Her leaving like a monsoon

Copyright © CrazyCowboy557 ... [ 2005-08-23 23:43:21]
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:35:40 AM AEST
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a flowing poem so touching and serene
loved the touch of the harvest moon too
welcome to ypdc
Michelle

Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:56:13 AM AEST
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I, too, love the flow of this poem, and the rhyme
was pretty well done too.

I particularly enjoyed this line:
"Next door an angel sat".

Powerful!

PS: A big warm welcome to YPDC! *huggies*

~KayT

Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:03:38 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...hope you like it here...and hope to see more of your work..
Jenni

Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by CrazyCowboy557 on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:09:10 AM AEST
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Thanks to everyone for the warm welcome and I'm glad you liked my poem, I have many others, and will be posting one everyday.

Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:30:16 AM AEST
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beautiful. Reminds me of the boy accross the street that I fell for when I was 16.

Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:34:59 PM AEST
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Welcome Cowboy! Love your poem. Will be looking for more. YPDC is a great place.

Smiles,
Rita

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