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Please hold me and love me.
Help wipes my tears,
And ease my fears.

Take me in your arms,
Fill me with your charms.
Make me feel warm inside,
Be my one true guide.

Whisper in my ear,
The words I want to hear.
My heart is broken down,
Don't leave it on the ground.

Put my heart in yours,
Help heal my sores.
Please be there for me,
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I Want You To Want Me

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I want you to want me,
Please hold me and love me.
Help wipes my tears,
And ease my fears.

Take me in your arms,
Fill me with your charms.
Make me feel warm inside,
Be my one true guide.

Whisper in my ear,
The words I want to hear.
My heart is broken down,
Don't leave it on the ground.

Put my heart in yours,
Help heal my sores.
Please be there for me,
I want you to want me.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2003-01-14 20:40:00]
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Re: I Want You To Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:42:00 AM AEST
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Candice,
This is a lovely poem, I can feel your emotions from here, and I'm several thousand miles away!
I do like this, it's all how I feel about my ex, still!!?
Very good, sincere writing Candice.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: I Want You To Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:46:17 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem... It's message is touching and simple just the way I like it. I found it interesting that I could read this poem in many different ways. For example the first time I read it straight through and liked it, then I read the first line of each stanza followed by the second lines etc... and still beautiful... I could probably mix up all the lines and put them back in any order and still enjoy this poem. Truly this is a sign that every line of this piece isa work of art. Good job.

Doug

"Loving someone you can't have is like reaching for a star. You know that you'll never reach it, but you have just got to keep trying."

Re: I Want You To Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:26:16 PM AEST
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Dean,
I am glad that you like this poem so much. I think that some of my other poems are much better, but this one is pretty good. Ican see that now that I have read it again. Sometimes I have to do that in order to see how it really is.
ShadowsCloud

Re: I Want You To Want Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 07:09:25 PM AEST
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Yes, I read the comment of Dougs(WordPoet) and he's absolutely right! It's one of them poems that just works for ya!
It's more excellent now than when first read!!

Well done Candice

With love
Dean:-)

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