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[aid] => mick
[title] => Monste(redone)
[time] => 2005-08-23 02:59:31
[hometext] => I wrote this before but it was just off my head since i didnt have it with me but here it is, the real version
[bodytext] => There is a monster inside me that has been unleashed. It can reak more havoc then you can make peace. I can't control what it does. When it takes over our hearts beat as one. It has always been there waiting to appear making sure you couldnt see it lurking there. Once it grasp a hold of my soul, I just lose control. It takes over, I'm the monster you see. I'm the one standing in front of you begging for help, only wanting to cry. My monster just makes me want to die.
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Monste(redone)
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BloodyTears5
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:59:31 AM in AEST
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There is a monster inside me that has been unleashed. It can reak more havoc then you can make peace. I can't control what it does. When it takes over our hearts beat as one. It has always been there waiting to appear making sure you couldnt see it lurking there. Once it grasp a hold of my soul, I just lose control. It takes over, I'm the monster you see. I'm the one standing in front of you begging for help, only wanting to cry. My monster just makes me want to die.
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Re: Monste(redone)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:11:07 AM AEST
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| A very interesting cocept, I have kind of felt like this in certain situations, sometimes it feel like my heart is beating, only there is another presence that it is beating along with it anyway. I liked your poem, keep on writing. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Monste(redone)
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by chazthepoet on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:56:47 PM AEST
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clever and intriging
write more |
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Re: Monste(redone)
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 06:14:33 PM AEST
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You are very courageous dear friend. To cry out aloud one's woes takes "guts"
You have it.
Had to be so, after all you are a LION" , ergo: "Lion-hearted"!
"Bow low, but do not go into his lair!"
Bravo for courage and the guts of "roaring"
Nexr comes the "Virgo" Oh so reflective and different.
Hugs
Elizabeth Dandy
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