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Array ( [sid] => 104211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When those words take wing [time] => 2005-08-23 01:48:07 [hometext] => I love it when she saids she loves me, well i am not sure if this is one long poem or two i just kept on writing till i liked what i had i hope you all read enjoy and comment [bodytext] =>

When those words take wing

From your lovely lips

Like heaven sent kisses

Reaching the very depths of me

They give my soul a chance to fly

I can soar above the clouds

When your eyes meet mine

I am in awe and left with out words

When I am with you I

Can’t advert my gaze

I take everything into memory

So that your beauty can chase

My demons away when I close my eyes

When your lips meet mine

I do not need to breathe

Locked in a kiss for ever

A most lovely endeavor

Where it will lead

We will have to wait and see

Till then it is enough

Just to have you in my arms

Sharing my warmth with you

And you yours with me

I know my purpose

Feel my birth

Feel our love move the earth

Change the way the current moves

There is no pain our love cannot sooth

Be one with the ever ebbing tide

On its waves go for a ride

Make raw stone into sapphires

That shine like eyes, a rampant fire

Breathe from your mouth life

Exist only to make you my wife

You are for ever with in my heart

No matter how far we are apart

I know my purpose

It is you

The only love I need to be true

Feel my birth

You give me my worth

You are my treasure

My inspiration, my love, my pleasure

You are my whole world

My world made whole

You are my greatest work of art unfurled

You are my soul
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When those words take wing

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:48:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





When those words take wing

From your lovely lips

Like heaven sent kisses

Reaching the very depths of me

They give my soul a chance to fly

I can soar above the clouds

When your eyes meet mine

I am in awe and left with out words

When I am with you I

Can’t advert my gaze

I take everything into memory

So that your beauty can chase

My demons away when I close my eyes

When your lips meet mine

I do not need to breathe

Locked in a kiss for ever

A most lovely endeavor

Where it will lead

We will have to wait and see

Till then it is enough

Just to have you in my arms

Sharing my warmth with you

And you yours with me

I know my purpose

Feel my birth

Feel our love move the earth

Change the way the current moves

There is no pain our love cannot sooth

Be one with the ever ebbing tide

On its waves go for a ride

Make raw stone into sapphires

That shine like eyes, a rampant fire

Breathe from your mouth life

Exist only to make you my wife

You are for ever with in my heart

No matter how far we are apart

I know my purpose

It is you

The only love I need to be true

Feel my birth

You give me my worth

You are my treasure

My inspiration, my love, my pleasure

You are my whole world

My world made whole

You are my greatest work of art unfurled

You are my soul




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Re: When those words take wing (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:11:20 AM AEST
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Change the way the current moves

There is no pain our love cannot sooth

Be one with the ever ebbing tide

On its waves go for a ride

Make raw stone into sapphires

That shine like eyes, a rampant fire


This is so beautiful, it is beyond beautiful but right now i'm drawing a blank on a better word, hehe, muaw


Re: When those words take wing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:14:25 AM AEST
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another loving romantic write. Very refreshing
Michelle


Re: When those words take wing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:43:04 AM AEST
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Wow a very beautiful romantic poem, I felt the warmth and the love in my heart. Good work. SLipSiX.


Re: When those words take wing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:00:13 AM AEST
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*****We will have to wait and see

Till then it is enough

Just to have you in my arms


Your write shows Important self-awareness with two separate people, yet very connected.

Also..

Your write does perform very appropriate and formative connection, effectively explored



******I know my purpose

It is you

The only love I need to be true


Great job.. terrific, thank you for posting..

RLPoetess ; ))









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