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Treacherous, black sky
Merciless and unafraid
Seized too many lives
A tragedy did outplay

A tragedy so unbearable
Every living soul did die
Like a doom-fated meteor
All fell from the sky

If I had the given chance
I would take anyone’s seat

Die instead of you

Husband and wife,
Unlived future, united as one in heart
Together at the very end
Now death do you part

Brother and sister,
Quarreling with each other again
Never thought this is where it all ends
On this cold and dreary plane

Little child,
I’m sure your mother held your hand
While you’re small heart came to a halt
Before you crashed upon the land

Teenage lovers,
So passionate, youthful vigour to give
Half-quenched the taste of love
Even though you will not live

Never thought by stepping onto this plane
You’d be robbed of the light of day
So many plans, hopes and dreams
For each of your souls we pray

Was there silence
Or did you shout?
I hope you weren’t too scared
When the lights went out

Almighty God we really need you now

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Tragedy in the Sky

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:56:36 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Treacherous, black sky
Merciless and unafraid
Seized too many lives
A tragedy did outplay

A tragedy so unbearable
Every living soul did die
Like a doom-fated meteor
All fell from the sky

If I had the given chance
I would take anyone’s seat

Die instead of you

Husband and wife,
Unlived future, united as one in heart
Together at the very end
Now death do you part

Brother and sister,
Quarreling with each other again
Never thought this is where it all ends
On this cold and dreary plane

Little child,
I’m sure your mother held your hand
While you’re small heart came to a halt
Before you crashed upon the land

Teenage lovers,
So passionate, youthful vigour to give
Half-quenched the taste of love
Even though you will not live

Never thought by stepping onto this plane
You’d be robbed of the light of day
So many plans, hopes and dreams
For each of your souls we pray

Was there silence
Or did you shout?
I hope you weren’t too scared
When the lights went out

Almighty God we really need you now

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-08-22 20:56:36]
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:05:55 PM AEST
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shocking
a stab to the heart really
i loved the words used
and the way you expressed it was
beautiful
-->Rae

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by helzwar007 on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:07:14 PM AEST
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This was a good poem -sa-sa-00ga-b00ga-

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:28:57 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful.... this is so sad....
Great tribute...
Jenni

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:19:39 PM AEST
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This is gallant a brilliant and compassionate peice of writting, u r 1 hell of a writter just thought i 'd add that ,bout time don't u think, in
a world, Beautiful . . .

Ben

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:53:04 PM AEST
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This was just awesome. Just brilliant. I'm at a loss for words....

Your fan,
C.

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:02:18 PM AEST
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This was too seet for words. What a sentimetal write.

Thanks for sharing tihs.

Jane~

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:30:36 PM AEST
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you know, even if I never step into a plane, I have not in 2 years, each time my husband goes to work, I always kiss and hug him so much. I always say I will see you at such and such a time.

His answer is always, see you when I return.. that he is not going anywhere..

You just do not know when the time is that God will come to get you.

I guess that is why we all say, be prepared.. for you do not know when He will come.

This write is so sad. I don't even want to imagine what took place as the plane was going down.

*****Treacherous, black sky
Merciless and unafraid

The skies have no fear is correct.

Your write certainly builds to a crescendo of emphasis to the end, very dramatic all the way. A sadly stressful write, brings lots of tears..

Raquel Leah :D

Re: Tragedy in the Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:35:06 AM AEST
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so sad... such a wonderfully written dedication......

hugs n' love nessa

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