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Array ( [sid] => 104179 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Love Letter [time] => 2005-08-22 19:05:36 [hometext] => A love letter I wrote to my boyfriend...it's hard since my parents have forbidden me to see him now... [bodytext] => I miss you so much and I can't wait for you to come back home, I wish you were here with me....
My heart feels heavy and is cracking inside because I'm not with you
I have no more tears left to cry because I've cried them all thinking of you
I promise I'll never leave you as long as you stay here with me
I watch as the cars go by and nothing new ever seems to happen
But when I'm with you the world opens before my eyes and so many things I've discovered
Everything reminds me of you in some complex connected way
Never is there a moment that I don't think of you each and everyday
Come back to me and fill the hole that you've left empty since you've gone away
I miss you and long to be at your side and hear the whispers that you say
Your eyes are so lovely to look at, so big and brown
I long to look at them and see the love that has grown there
Inside I am cold and desolately lonely
Please come back and take me into your arms once more so that I can feel the love that I know is there
I miss you my love, please come back to me soon.... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Kitty06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Love Letter

Contributed by Kitty06 on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:05:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I miss you so much and I can't wait for you to come back home, I wish you were here with me....
My heart feels heavy and is cracking inside because I'm not with you
I have no more tears left to cry because I've cried them all thinking of you
I promise I'll never leave you as long as you stay here with me
I watch as the cars go by and nothing new ever seems to happen
But when I'm with you the world opens before my eyes and so many things I've discovered
Everything reminds me of you in some complex connected way
Never is there a moment that I don't think of you each and everyday
Come back to me and fill the hole that you've left empty since you've gone away
I miss you and long to be at your side and hear the whispers that you say
Your eyes are so lovely to look at, so big and brown
I long to look at them and see the love that has grown there
Inside I am cold and desolately lonely
Please come back and take me into your arms once more so that I can feel the love that I know is there
I miss you my love, please come back to me soon....




Copyright © Kitty06 ... [ 2005-08-22 19:05:36]
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Re: The Love Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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This is the sweetest thing I have ever read. It sucks that your 'rents aint lettin you see him but *****in I guess they got there reasons anyway if you feel like this and he feels the same yall should be togather but I aint your 'rents so its not up to me anyway ill stop rambling good write


Re: The Love Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:26:59 PM AEST
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so much heartfelt love and admiration...............your poem was just seeping with forlorn emotions.....

great lament, I really feel for ya....your in a tricky situation with your parents but hang in there....you two will be together again!


Re: The Love Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:43:12 PM AEST
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o wow, very good write. i know what this is like, it wasnt to long ago i was feeling like this. the pain can sometimes be unbearable but things do get better, i hope it doesnt take long for you though. i hope you can be with your boyfirend soon.
A sad poem but filled with love for your man.
luv


Re: The Love Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by HatchetGirl on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 12:16:52 PM AEST
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It's so sad how you can't see him...... I too hope he come back soon. It makes me sad to see you like this. Great way of writting emotions, though




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