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Array ( [sid] => 104175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Singing in the Shower [time] => 2005-08-22 17:55:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The water is hot,
The steam runs over me,
Then I travel beyond,
What I will ever dream,

I picutre myself,
In lights that blind,
Scared to death,
But the audience is kind,

The microphone's on,
My heart echos loud,
My brother brags to his friends,
My parents are proud,

The music starts,
The piano is gentle,
The drums ring out,
The nerves are all mental,

As I start to sing,
The lights get so hot,
My palms start to sweat,
I'm in my happy spot,

After the last note,
And the last drum beat,
I take a deep breath,
While the people rise from their seats,

One clap, then two,
My smile won't fade,
I take a little bow,
And I just simple wave,

Walking backstage,
My fans there to greet me,
This life for me is great,
I finally feel free,

If my manager would let me,
I could sing for hours,
But then I open my eyes,
And I'm still in the shower.

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Singing in the Shower

Contributed by Writting_Fever on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

The water is hot,
The steam runs over me,
Then I travel beyond,
What I will ever dream,

I picutre myself,
In lights that blind,
Scared to death,
But the audience is kind,

The microphone's on,
My heart echos loud,
My brother brags to his friends,
My parents are proud,

The music starts,
The piano is gentle,
The drums ring out,
The nerves are all mental,

As I start to sing,
The lights get so hot,
My palms start to sweat,
I'm in my happy spot,

After the last note,
And the last drum beat,
I take a deep breath,
While the people rise from their seats,

One clap, then two,
My smile won't fade,
I take a little bow,
And I just simple wave,

Walking backstage,
My fans there to greet me,
This life for me is great,
I finally feel free,

If my manager would let me,
I could sing for hours,
But then I open my eyes,
And I'm still in the shower.

Copyright © Writting_Fever ... [ 2005-08-22 17:55:24]
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Re: Singing in the Shower (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:38:12 PM AEST
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This poem made me smile...Very well done! This is so true i think for so many people....sometimes we forget we are in the shower. Great work!

Re: Singing in the Shower (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:46:10 PM AEST
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great rhythum and lovely idea true poetry at it's best . . .

Ben

Re: Singing in the Shower (User Rating: 1 )
by shaydie_lady on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 03:47:09 PM AEST
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I have imagianed stuff like that before

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