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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Devil of Denial
[time] => 2005-08-22 15:41:37
[hometext] => I picked this topic for the amusement factor...Sometimes you just gotta laugh, or else you'd cry...Hope I don't offend anyone.
[bodytext] => She wept
for her innocence swept
Under the rug
Do your heartstrings tug?
Ma, why didn't you see
what he was doing to me?
Obvious to those
that gave a damn, I suppose
Right under your nose
but you were high on blow
You walked in, or didn't you know?
He was your friend, but my nightmare
Who looks to a 9 year old for an affair?
In the end he couldn't complete his deed
spared the wrath of his filthy seed
He started my liquid addiction
soothing my ceaseless affliction
He wound up dead
you said I should cry, but I laughed instead
She wept
for her innocence swept
under the rug
Ma replied with a shrug.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 449
[topic] => 44
[informant] => hauntedscorp
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 96
[ratings] => 20
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Nostalgic
)
Devil of Denial
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:41:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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She wept
for her innocence swept
Under the rug
Do your heartstrings tug?
Ma, why didn't you see
what he was doing to me?
Obvious to those
that gave a damn, I suppose
Right under your nose
but you were high on blow
You walked in, or didn't you know?
He was your friend, but my nightmare
Who looks to a 9 year old for an affair?
In the end he couldn't complete his deed
spared the wrath of his filthy seed
He started my liquid addiction
soothing my ceaseless affliction
He wound up dead
you said I should cry, but I laughed instead
She wept
for her innocence swept
under the rug
Ma replied with a shrug.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-08-22 15:41:37]
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:13:23 PM AEST
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wow, this was a really good write. i agree, sometimes you do have to laugh or u will cry. keep up the good work.
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:26:55 PM AEST
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| a sad poem written brilliantly, well done |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:04:41 PM AEST
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| Wow scorp...this one put me at a loss for words....and that doesn't happen to me to often. LOL I wish we could sit and chat, with a good smoke. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:54:11 PM AEST
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truly deep and emotional no offence here
just poetic artistry from a hurting heart . . .
((((((((scorp)))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:13:09 PM AEST
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good write, scorp. i truely enjoyed this. and don't worry, you didn't offend me. but, good write, you did it well (as you always do). good write, by a great poetic person. well done, scorp, keep it up!
~sprints
p.s. Don't worry! really, don't. i still think your head is on right... lol. |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:57:19 PM AEST
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This is obviously a very sensative issue with a lot of pain, yet handled in a masterful fashion. The poem itself is subperb in its style and form. Being able to put it into a perspective that is tolerable is truely a talent in itself. As an aside....when I was in clinical practice, it never ceased to amaze me as to how many women were abused.
Well done, really well done, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by Mangos on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:55:18 PM AEST
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wow scorp this was a poerful write...reminds me of an eminem song..which is a good thing cuz he writes....and hes a millionaire.....nice job with this....hard to swallow cuz the imagery is so vivid and bitter.....
keep up the awesome writing
nice job |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:20:13 PM AEST
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To laugh at something this vile is nothing
other than strength in it's purest form..
and to put it to paper is more than-
I don't know what else to say..
Brave and beyond-
Love-
B |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:57:35 AM AEST
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This is a deep Innervision
I really don't know what to say
well done. |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:00:54 PM AEST
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| Wow, Scorp, that is powerfully sad. Damn great write if I say so myself and no I'm of course not offended but can't help but say it choked me up. I understand someone's need to laugh in a situation like this , however, for myself, it was hard not to get all choked up while reading it. Seems saying powerful write isn't powerful enough for this one but I am at a loss for words (even though I just typed several). Simply put....you are a great poet / writer!!!!! Never stop....please!!!! |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:53:33 PM AEST
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| I would be very angry if something like that happened to a child. This must have been a hard write. |
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Re: Devil of Denial
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 12:04:10 PM AEST
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Great write.. Sometimes you just have to laugh to stay sane. this was really good..
christina |
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