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The next day he's more.
One day one of the crowd
The next day he's the only one you're looking for.
One day just a guy
The next day he's themost important guy in your world.
One day blending in
The next day he's standing out.
One day ignored
The next day he's your world.
And you?
One day his friend
The next day...
Still just his friend.
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The Next Day

Contributed by Shnannon on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

One day a friend
The next day he's more.
One day one of the crowd
The next day he's the only one you're looking for.
One day just a guy
The next day he's themost important guy in your world.
One day blending in
The next day he's standing out.
One day ignored
The next day he's your world.
And you?
One day his friend
The next day...
Still just his friend.

Copyright © Shnannon ... [ 2005-08-22 01:29:29]
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Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:35:58 AM AEST
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i like it.........i like the transformation in the poem and the start was especially lovely to read....

unhappy ending.....but mainly the truth

good job!

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:20:12 AM AEST
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Very well written.
good job.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:59:50 AM AEST
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this heart breaking feeling is so well expressed in this write, well done!!!!

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:22:08 PM AEST
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Nicely written ! A crush can give you immense vitality,but literally tear you down when the only one living it is you.
PumpkinPie

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by NoangelNohope on Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 07:23:41 PM AEST
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great irony =)

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