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I mutter a soft ‘goodbye’
I’m standing by my pond
I have my magical wand,
My hand is cradling the pistol
As I say ‘bye to all this bull
I’m gripping the handle tightly,
My finger on the trigger lightly,
I place the pistol to my head,
I prepare to fall into my grass bed
The quiet is disturbed by the loud blast
Unlike me, the echo of the shot lasts
I look up through my bloody eyes
And say goodbye to the red night sky
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Night Sky

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:41:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As I look at the night sky
I mutter a soft ‘goodbye’
I’m standing by my pond
I have my magical wand,
My hand is cradling the pistol
As I say ‘bye to all this bull
I’m gripping the handle tightly,
My finger on the trigger lightly,
I place the pistol to my head,
I prepare to fall into my grass bed
The quiet is disturbed by the loud blast
Unlike me, the echo of the shot lasts
I look up through my bloody eyes
And say goodbye to the red night sky

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Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:27:23 PM AEST
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short and potent. i hope you find the strength to make it through.

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:01:35 AM AEST
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nice poem, it has a good flow
always here if you need to talk, megs xXx

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:30:14 AM AEST
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this is bloody awesome!!!!!!!! uve put my dreams into words, well done

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:53:33 AM AEST
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Chilling write...Subject aside, the rhyming and flow were really good, and the emotions were strong, but delivered in an almost eerie, delicate touch...I do enjoy your writes; even your suicidal ones : O

Scorp.

Re: Night Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:39:05 PM AEST
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Yes, short, but good. In a sense, that is. Suicide is never the answer. No matter what goes on...there's always a better way, you just have to be willing to look deeper. Look past the chains and people, you must look deeper in yourself. But who cares, philosphy is almost overrated...I seem to use it too much.
Peace,
Agent Bones
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